Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Light Verse

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- Pain -

Love filled nights and petty fights 
How could she be so blind, to be left behind 
Will you understand ... the pain

He left her without saying goodbye
If she could only turn back time
Will you understand ... the numbness

She's the broken wings of a dove
No reason left to fight anymore
Will you understand ... her loneliness










08.05-2017
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Carole Duet June 23, 2017 at 4:20 PM A great little poem, Anne Lisa. So realistic. Anne-Lise Andresen June 23, 2017 at 4:22 PM - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comments, Carole :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dean Wood May 11, 2017 at 7:52 PM Oh, I hope this is not your pain. Anne-Lise Andresen May 12, 2017 at 3:18 AM - "She" feel the pain ...not me, Dean :) - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Scott Thirtyseven May 11, 2017 at 12:09 PM Thinking of this piece with a Nurse's pain score in mind, I give it an 8/10. Brings tears to your eyes. Happy International Nurse's Day. I'm doing nights so will sleep through a whole big chunk of it. Enjoy Anne-Lise Andresen May 12, 2017 at 3:16 AM - Happy International Nurse's Day, to you too Scott :) - Hope you got a peaceful night - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath May 11, 2017 at 10:40 AM A pain of cool volcanic cyclone of madness is sustained only in such a heartbreaking moments. The bearer knows the exact feeling what is that. Extreme beauty in expression my lovely dear friend. A great 7. Loved always, bl Anne-Lise Andresen May 12, 2017 at 3:14 AM - Many thanks for your visit a 7 and lovely comments, Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carol B. May 11, 2017 at 7:27 AM So sad you feel her pain. Great write :) Anne-Lise Andresen May 11, 2017 at 7:30 AM - "She" feel the pain, Carol - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock May 10, 2017 at 4:33 PM I can feel and picture the sadness . You portrayed the feelings so well in this piece. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen May 11, 2017 at 2:12 AM - Phyllis, many thanks for your visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams May 10, 2017 at 3:29 AM Its never happened to me Anne-Lise, but I do understand pain like this having comforted many a friend in need. Wonderful in its sadness. A7++ Maria xxx Anne-Lise Andresen May 10, 2017 at 1:58 PM - Thanks for the great comments a 7 and lovely visits, my friend Maria :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper May 9, 2017 at 7:28 PM Beautiful :-) Anne-Lise Andresen May 10, 2017 at 1:57 PM - Eve, thank you for your nice visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich May 9, 2017 at 5:55 PM I liked your poem and the way it portrayed the lovely picture, Anne Lise. WEll done. Anne-Lise Andresen May 10, 2017 at 1:56 PM - Thank you Andrea, for your nice visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Michaels May 9, 2017 at 4:14 PM Such a sad piece, Anne-Lisa. Hopefully this dove's wings will mend in time! All the best, John. Anne-Lise Andresen May 10, 2017 at 1:55 PM - Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian May 9, 2017 at 2:41 PM Oh, my dear...How this touched me. Beautiful piece. It takes a person with a large heart to be able to understand. Loved this poem, dear. Hugs Anne-Lise Andresen May 10, 2017 at 1:55 PM - Dear Eileen, many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith May 9, 2017 at 2:21 PM Quite the opposite of your pen name but so well done Anne-Lise... Anne-Lise Andresen May 9, 2017 at 2:27 PM - My poems is seldom about myself, Charlie - But, I do not always smile :) - Thank you for your nice visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May May 9, 2017 at 7:20 AM Broken hearts lead to sadness...Very nicely penned Anne Anne-Lise Andresen May 9, 2017 at 2:29 PM - Thank you for your nice visits and comments, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis May 9, 2017 at 5:59 AM Your writing has turned sadness into a pleasant reading my friend, Anne-Lise! A 7! Hugs! Anne-Lise Andresen May 9, 2017 at 2:35 PM - Thanks for the great friendly comments a 7 and lovely visits, my friend Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lisa Ricci May 9, 2017 at 5:54 AM Dear Anne Good Morning. My goodness the expression and the emotive factor are so ever present. You have wonderfully perfectly and gracefully stated this situation and state of mind of the one left behind and the one in pain. Allow me to say you also have a message of worth because far often than not people do not see or hear or yes understand. Take your bow. Have a wonderful morning and day. Well done entirely. Anne-Lise Andresen May 9, 2017 at 2:34 PM - Dear Lisa, thank you for the wonderful friendly comments and enjoyable visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Akkina Downing May 9, 2017 at 5:13 AM Yes I would... A pinch of sadness but so beautiful, Anne-Lise... Hugs :) Anne-Lise Andresen May 9, 2017 at 2:32 PM - Akkina, many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam May 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM Excellent and sad poem of lost love. Thanks for sharing it. Anne-Lise Andresen May 9, 2017 at 2:32 PM - Thank you for your nice visits and comments, Ravi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso May 8, 2017 at 11:11 PM Such sadness and beauty in a poem! Anne-Lise Andresen May 9, 2017 at 2:31 PM - Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Arthur - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Abdullah Alhemaidy May 8, 2017 at 7:31 PM Touchy light sad poem! Anne-Lise Andresen May 9, 2017 at 2:30 PM - Abdullah, thank you for your nice visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ilene Bauer May 8, 2017 at 5:54 PM so sad but such a true depiction of pain, anne-lise... Anne-Lise Andresen May 9, 2017 at 2:29 PM - Thank you for your nice visits and comments, Ilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison May 8, 2017 at 5:33 PM I think many can relate to the heartbreak you express so vividly Anne-lise:-( hugs Jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen May 9, 2017 at 2:29 PM - Thank you for your nice visits and comments, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands May 8, 2017 at 5:27 PM Well expressed poem. The reader can feel it fully ! Anne-Lise Andresen May 9, 2017 at 4:03 AM - Glad you enjoyed it, Heidi :) - Thanks for visit and your comments :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green May 8, 2017 at 2:23 PM I agree with Tim below, the sadness in this piece is pouring out on the page my friend. Wow, this was sadly beautiful. Anne-Lise Andresen May 9, 2017 at 3:59 AM - Chris, many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - happy hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith May 8, 2017 at 2:17 PM The sadness overcomes this piece but is so well written...a fav Anne-Lise Andresen May 9, 2017 at 3:59 AM - Glad you enjoyed it,Tim :) - Thanks for visit a fav. and your comments :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud May 8, 2017 at 2:16 PM ohh, sullen yet beautifully written, anne... hopefully this is not you... happy huggs! Anne-Lise Andresen May 8, 2017 at 2:25 PM - No, it's not me ... I'm fine :) - Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Nette - happy hugs // Anne-Lise :)