Pain

of suffering deep, tween pain and asleep, and the curse still lingers like crime, a fiendish mind wheels, still turning out deals, and slip-sliding thoughts to begrime, get back in your box, un-sweet albatross, begone to the nethers of mind, bad voices are still, mourning their loss, in spirit i'm doing just fine, got a grip on its throat, never mind, bad thoughts continue to gloat, yet the battle is mine, bloody mine... of: p.d. "Cronic Pain" Don
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Horsman Avatar
April 21, 2020 at 9:41 PM
RE-reading poems from my favourites list, this gem from 2012,,Don, i know you have passed, and hope you are at peace. Your poetry friend..Harry
Nutter Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 4:55 PM
You describe it well, I know chronic pain to well. NICE WRITE MATE
Liwayway Avatar
September 16, 2012 at 11:14 AM
nicely written poem friend Don....thanks for sharing :) have a nice day!!
Sivey Avatar
September 16, 2012 at 10:55 AM
Woah, what a tremendously incredible write my friend! I am amazed with the power of your words you show within this poem Don! I really enjoyed this delightful little write this afternoon! You ingenious of a poem sure moves mountains with its intrigue, I love this piece, Great Work!!
Dufresne Avatar
September 16, 2012 at 5:33 AM
and the battle rages in these lines and between the pages. Good as it gets Don. nice ingenious descript
Johnson Avatar
September 16, 2012 at 4:25 AM
Good on you Harry old mate, words to plow or incinerate, just wafflin at ya now:)
Horsman Avatar
September 16, 2012 at 3:18 AM
here Don, this is bloody brilliant, what can i say.. to my fav along with you.........
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