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Paid Is Thy Bill

The gap between us holds no air, fuel it is still Tree leaves above us, fan passions fiery will Once I thought only a dream, my wishes, you fulfill Every strength I find within you, attraction, does instill Your memory, throughout my mind, woven like fine twill Touch by you is masterful, possessing loves language with skill Warm and safe, you'll want for nothing with me, paid is thy bill

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Paige Hind

Date: 6/29/2023 11:34:00 AM

Beautifully and passionately written!

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 6/29/2023 11:54:00 AM

Just as important as love. Feeling safe and comforted by someone was the feelings I tried to invoke. I'm very glad you enjoyed this! Regards A.S.

I Am Anaya

Date: 6/28/2023 10:49:00 AM

Romantic art thou. What kind of trees? Palm fronds make delightful umbrellas! Enjoyed your monoku, A.S.

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 6/28/2023 12:23:00 PM

Silver Maples to be exact. Thank you for the very flattering compliment! Fondest regards A.S.

Deb M

Date: 6/26/2023 4:22:00 PM

Hi A.S….what a great poem and l just love the perfect last line! Really enjoyed it! Debx

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 6/26/2023 4:32:00 PM

Appreciate you as always Deb! I'm very glad you enjoyed it. Warmly A.S.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 6/26/2023 11:56:00 AM

Well, chivalry is not dead as long as your ink is wet. Bravo <3

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 6/26/2023 1:15:00 PM

The day that men stopped teaching their sons to be chivalrous, to respect women not because they need it because they deserve it that's when you know the world is truly lost. As long as I live and breathe that will never happen! <3 A.S.