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Pages From An Era

Into a garden sprayed by night's rain, Jen slouches under a dim lamplight as the wind gushes on her divan sweeping pages of a long era, jotted down through crystal-clear memoirs from her flawless hand, still radiant... while tendrils of a past causes her eyes to melt in glass of evening. She pauses between emblazoned lines, a web of saga transports her musings in a village where life detailed the pain and glory of unwanted wartime; the smoky air turning fruits into molds as land raids wheezed without children’s sounds. Quietly, Jen folds the sepia-book to find beauty in her lit garden, while cloudburst fades like distant remains... then, washing the leaves of yesteryears, she breathes in solace: a woman freed by putting a name to her past angst, ready for rain’s music of tamed sleep. ............. Poem In Paradise Contest Sponsor: Isaiah Zerbst 7/21/2014

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Date: 7/29/2014 12:13:00 PM
amazing win...PD
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Date: 7/24/2014 6:34:00 AM
Your images are beyond compare. I love...'her eyes to melt in glass of evening". Your words are a dream.
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Date: 7/23/2014 10:23:00 AM
Showers of applause to your great work Nette! ^_^ <3 <3
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Date: 7/23/2014 8:17:00 AM
An awesome write my friend. The last stanza the icing on the cake!!! HUGE CONGRATS on your great win!!!
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Date: 7/23/2014 8:12:00 AM
I love your use of imagery Nette, congratulations.
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Date: 7/23/2014 8:09:00 AM
Many deserved congratulations, Nette! You have so many beautiful phrases in this poem, and the last stanza is awesome. // paul
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Date: 7/23/2014 8:04:00 AM
Such a beautiful write. A well deserved winner! hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/23/2014 7:35:00 AM
Big congratulations to you Nette for your great win which is well-deserved. This is such a beautiful write. Warmest regards!
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Date: 7/23/2014 6:23:00 AM
Sweet, Nette! I had not read this till now... Magnificent!!!... A masterpiece!!.. Congrats on a great win dear!.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/23/2014 5:25:00 AM
And there u r nette with a win my dear,, huge congrats!
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Date: 7/23/2014 3:46:00 AM
Superb Nette, yet again. Just love your work. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/22/2014 7:25:00 AM
Good luck :) Keep your fingers crossed :)
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Date: 7/22/2014 5:35:00 AM
Reads like a winner..Way to go for the contest.Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 7/22/2014 3:46:00 AM
Beautiful indeed,, pages from an era,, memories to cherish,, perfect write Nette,, truly loved this one //Upma//
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Date: 7/22/2014 3:03:00 AM
Thank you Nette for your ever welcome comments on my structured prose.Best wishes with your creative endeavours Rgds Brian
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Date: 7/21/2014 5:16:00 PM
wow, nette, so lovely and poignant this is. One of the best ones I have read for this contest. he has some very charming entries to choose from!
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Date: 7/21/2014 5:00:00 PM
Very evocative! Thank you for your kind words! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 7/21/2014 3:21:00 PM
Nette, if I only had that book, I won't able to put it down. Absolutely stunning story!
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Date: 7/21/2014 2:48:00 PM
Amazing poetry as usual Net!See I am here!
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Date: 7/21/2014 2:46:00 PM
Yes!!!
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