Pages From An Era

Into a garden sprayed by night's rain,
Jen  slouches under a dim lamplight
as the wind gushes on her divan
sweeping pages of a long era,
jotted down through crystal-clear memoirs
from her flawless hand, still radiant... 
while tendrils of a past causes
her eyes to melt in glass of evening.

She pauses between emblazoned lines,
a web of saga transports her musings
in a village where life detailed the pain
and glory of unwanted wartime;
the smoky air turning fruits into molds
as land raids wheezed without children’s sounds.

Quietly, Jen folds the sepia-book
to find beauty in her lit garden,
while cloudburst fades like distant remains...
then, washing the leaves of yesteryears,
she breathes in solace: a woman freed
by putting a name to her past angst,
ready for rain’s music of tamed sleep.


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Poem In Paradise Contest
Sponsor: Isaiah Zerbst
7/21/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A   Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 12:13 PM
amazing win...PD
Sirak Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 6:34 AM
Your images are beyond compare. I love...'her eyes to melt in glass of evening". Your words are a dream.
Kimathi Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 10:23 AM
Showers of applause to your great work Nette! ^_^ <3 <3
Lindley Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 8:17 AM
An awesome write my friend. The last stanza the icing on the cake!!! HUGE CONGRATS on your great win!!!
Lamoureux Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 8:12 AM
I love your use of imagery Nette, congratulations.
Callus Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 8:09 AM
Many deserved congratulations, Nette! You have so many beautiful phrases in this poem, and the last stanza is awesome. // paul
Allison Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 8:04 AM
Such a beautiful write. A well deserved winner! hugs jan xx
Sietesantos Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 7:35 AM
Big congratulations to you Nette for your great win which is well-deserved. This is such a beautiful write. Warmest regards!
Smith Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 6:23 AM
Sweet, Nette! I had not read this till now... Magnificent!!!... A masterpiece!!.. Congrats on a great win dear!.. Hugs.. Arlene
A. Sharma Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 5:25 AM
And there u r nette with a win my dear,, huge congrats!
Trichet Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 3:46 AM
Superb Nette, yet again. Just love your work. Congratulations!
Khan Avatar
July 22, 2014 at 7:25 AM
Good luck :) Keep your fingers crossed :)
Kendrick Avatar
July 22, 2014 at 5:35 AM
Reads like a winner..Way to go for the contest.Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
A. Sharma Avatar
July 22, 2014 at 3:46 AM
Beautiful indeed,, pages from an era,, memories to cherish,, perfect write Nette,, truly loved this one //Upma//
Strand Avatar
July 22, 2014 at 3:03 AM
Thank you Nette for your ever welcome comments on my structured prose.Best wishes with your creative endeavours Rgds Brian
Dietrich Avatar
July 21, 2014 at 5:16 PM
wow, nette, so lovely and poignant this is. One of the best ones I have read for this contest. he has some very charming entries to choose from!
Anish Avatar
July 21, 2014 at 5:00 PM
Very evocative! Thank you for your kind words! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Datu Avatar
July 21, 2014 at 3:21 PM
Nette, if I only had that book, I won't able to put it down. Absolutely stunning story!
Poet Avatar
July 21, 2014 at 2:48 PM
Amazing poetry as usual Net!See I am here!
Poet Avatar
July 21, 2014 at 2:46 PM
Yes!!!
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