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Page Twenty-Eight

What shall I place on page twenty-eight? my loves, my goals, my sorrows? I'm hoping through grace my words (though not great) will still ring true tomorrow My soul flows again from my diligent pen and gathers my thoughts and emotions setting in place a run-away pace that clings to my truest devotion For writing like this - it's an absolute bliss to share with the world my desires So whatever I place on page twenty-eight it's with hope that I've truly inspired

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Date: 4/7/2017 8:26:00 PM
Don't save your inspiration until 28, the first 27 need love too :) Your thoughts are good though, since we're always looking to make each word, line or page special in their own way. Nice job. Best, Subby
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 4/7/2017 8:38:00 PM
Well thanks for the gentle read, Subby!
Date: 4/3/2017 1:01:00 PM
Brilliant Gayle. I really like this piece. Both the subject and your style of writing. +7
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 4/3/2017 1:05:00 PM
Thank you, Barry. It's funny, I think I started the first few lines of this piece when I was 16! I'm surprised I could still read the print on the rough draft lol!
Date: 4/3/2017 12:52:00 PM
Here's hoping pages 1-27 are as brilliant as this piece of writing, if so moving to page 29 with be easy. I really enjoyed this one Gayle. I believe that is the hope of most of us who write, that somehow our words help inspire.
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 4/3/2017 12:56:00 PM
Thank you, fellow writer ;) There is a kinship that thrives here don'tcha think? It's nice to walk in the midst of such kind people.

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