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Pagan Rose--Abc

ambrosia… bosoms climb desire’s ecstasy, flesh grinds, heated in juicy kisses-- lips mounting, nibbling often pagan… quivering rose succumbs to unbuttoned virility; wanton… x-marking yearning’s zest! afterglow... burnt candles dissolve embers, fondled groans heave into joyful kindling... lusty moon's navel offers pauses-- quilt's rippled sighs trickling under velvet whispers, x-axis yielding zones. Allright Poet's ABC Contest Re-submitted 5/10/2020

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/8/2015 2:07:00 AM

Outstanding work nette! Congrats on first place win!

Anindya Mohan Tagore

Date: 10/4/2015 10:17:00 PM

This is simply magnificent... Regards, Bobby

Skat A

Date: 10/4/2015 6:49:00 PM

Hi Nette, Congrats on your beautiful win. Love SKAT

Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/4/2015 6:35:00 PM

What a great job you did! Perfectly serious and well told using that format is hard to pull off. I see why you got first place ... CayCay

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/4/2015 12:35:00 AM

Congrats on your number 1 placement with this, Nette. It's nice that you went for the whole spectrum of passion. Hugs

Balveen Cheema

Date: 10/3/2015 11:32:00 PM

How beautifully put! A 7! Congrats Nette!

Joseph Guth

Date: 10/3/2015 10:19:00 PM

Loved reading this.

Mark Woods

Date: 10/3/2015 8:03:00 PM

The goddess of imagery strikes again, twice. Wonderfully done, congrats on the win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/3/2015 7:12:00 PM

wow no wonder you won. You did a double one. Double delight!! BIG congrats.

James Inman

Date: 10/3/2015 5:32:00 PM

Beautifully written, Nette. Naughty but very nice.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/3/2015 4:54:00 PM

You rock a7:-)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/3/2015 3:12:00 PM

Nette, I don't know how you came up with two of these poems. I struggled to come up with one. Wow, I am so impressed with these. You certainly deserve your first place win. Congratulations! #7

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/3/2015 2:53:00 PM

Charlotte said it all, Nette! Wonderfully done with outstanding imagery. Congrats on your top of the podium win! Hugs, Sandra

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 10/3/2015 2:15:00 PM

wow, you did a double one (one was enough for me!) but not only that, you packed stunning imagery into it, proving once again that when it comes to imagery and manipulation of language you are the one to beat! very impressive - congrats on your 1st place win in my contest!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/3/2015 2:08:00 PM

Dropping back with my congratulations Nette:-) hugs Jan xx

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 9/29/2015 3:56:00 PM

So enchanting and and beautifully sensual Nette and you wrote two! Amazing! Hugs

Paul Callus

Date: 9/29/2015 1:07:00 PM

What can I say!! Ambrosia is a fav of mine...afterglow as well!! A double ABC written in a most sensual yet artistic way. An offering that hits the right buttons without going to undignified extremes. Top marks to you, Nette! I won't wish you luck...you don't need it:) Hugs // paul

Cherl Dunn

Date: 9/28/2015 5:23:00 PM

Dear Nette You got all the right letters put into place here,lol a great entry for this contest my friend good luck, keep up the good work, cheri

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/28/2015 11:25:00 AM

I had to hold my breath from fear I spoiled the atmosphere! Pure sensual verses! Good luck dear one! PS and lead us not in....Ha-ha, nette!

Carly Lalion

Date: 9/28/2015 11:09:00 AM

WOW! You have a sensual and tenderly passionate side that is both kinesthetic and classy. The word arrangement is---ambrosial!

Kp Nunez

Date: 9/27/2015 7:16:00 PM

Gosh, Nette...you made it look so easy with all the requisites, form and sensual theme! I'm with Jan...just one and that was all for me...lol! Best! hugs!

Gabby Sabre

Date: 9/27/2015 3:40:00 PM

You created an intimate, sultry tone which was tastefully done. Now, that's sensual artistry. Breathtaking poem with an afterglow effect after the culmination of love's act.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/27/2015 2:07:00 PM

- Bravo ..... love it! - Unique .... ecstasy - I wish you good luck in the contest and one lovely new week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/27/2015 1:06:00 PM

ohhh Nette you pulled out all the stops with two sensual poems i struggled with one! good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx