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Pacing Along Graveyards

And the cemetery was littered with debris
While I paced the graveyards in crushed marble,
That seraphic figures draped the woeful air 
Enshrining those long gone…names forgotten
By time’s entombment of a shrunken past 
As black roses moved with the cold, cold wind.

From  this moment, a heavy silence tugs me;
I kneel down and cry, sighing they find peace
As broken wings perch on my shoulders
That my hands fold in deepened appeal,
Requesting the guardians of life
To teach me  stillness when the last twilight
Comes, till  the gasp of arriving and leaving
Lays me to rest , tranquil and sweet
With burst of petals along my cemetery;  
Knowing not if I have ever lived 
In the fullness of love…or fallen from grace.


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For the Contest:Any Poem You Ever Penned
Sponsored by Broken Wings   
Posted 5/20/2016 ... Not entered in any contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 10:35 AM
wow, this is so fantastic, Nette. Was just meandering by the old contest winner lists (I miss the old way they used to be shown). Nowadays it's so easy to overlook the winners of the contests the way they are showing the lists. Anyway, Big congrats in the contest of BW. A well deserved win.
Day Avatar
June 9, 2016 at 4:29 PM
Congrats on your win for the "Any Poem You Ever Penned" poetry contest. I enjoyed your work - Jesse
Chansarkar Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 3:27 PM
Lovely one Congratulations!
Haight Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 2:59 PM
Deep and lovely, Nette. Congratulation on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra
Vaso Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 10:12 AM
Now I am sure you know, a topic I cover a lot, and I just loved this poem, a fav and a7!! hugs
Gasun Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 3:19 AM
A well-written descriptive poem my dear friend, Nette. I almost have the same feelings and thoughts whenever I pace along a graveyard. A 7+++ Good luck and best wishes always. love lots and big hug, Lorry
Andresen Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 4:22 PM
- A wonderful and impressive poem, Nette - Heavy topic - Luck in contest - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mara Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 12:16 PM
Just passing by to say that I am overwhelmed by this , despondent, brilliant poem with a twist of personal reflection on death!
Gonza Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 11:54 AM
Seeing one's own vulnerability through others long gone is indeed an epiphany and honest confession about death. 7+ for this solemn, majestic poem!
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