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And the cemetery was littered with debris While I paced the graveyards in crushed marble, That seraphic figures draped the woeful air Enshrining those long gone…names forgotten By time’s entombment of a shrunken past As black roses moved with the cold, cold wind. From this moment, a heavy silence tugs me; I kneel down and cry, sighing they find peace As broken wings perch on my shoulders That my hands fold in deepened appeal, Requesting the guardians of life To teach me stillness when the last twilight Comes, till the gasp of arriving and leaving Lays me to rest , tranquil and sweet With burst of petals along my cemetery; Knowing not if I have ever lived In the fullness of love…or fallen from grace. ................. For the Contest:Any Poem You Ever Penned Sponsored by Broken Wings Posted 5/20/2016 ... Not entered in any contest

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Date: 6/12/2016 10:35:00 AM
wow, this is so fantastic, Nette. Was just meandering by the old contest winner lists (I miss the old way they used to be shown). Nowadays it's so easy to overlook the winners of the contests the way they are showing the lists. Anyway, Big congrats in the contest of BW. A well deserved win.
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Date: 6/9/2016 4:29:00 PM
Congrats on your win for the "Any Poem You Ever Penned" poetry contest. I enjoyed your work - Jesse
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Date: 6/8/2016 3:27:00 PM
Lovely one Congratulations!
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Date: 6/8/2016 2:59:00 PM
Deep and lovely, Nette. Congratulation on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/21/2016 10:12:00 AM
Now I am sure you know, a topic I cover a lot, and I just loved this poem, a fav and a7!! hugs
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Date: 5/21/2016 3:19:00 AM
A well-written descriptive poem my dear friend, Nette. I almost have the same feelings and thoughts whenever I pace along a graveyard. A 7+++ Good luck and best wishes always. love lots and big hug, Lorry
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Date: 5/20/2016 4:22:00 PM
- A wonderful and impressive poem, Nette - Heavy topic - Luck in contest - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/20/2016 12:16:00 PM
Just passing by to say that I am overwhelmed by this , despondent, brilliant poem with a twist of personal reflection on death!
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Date: 5/20/2016 11:54:00 AM
Seeing one's own vulnerability through others long gone is indeed an epiphany and honest confession about death. 7+ for this solemn, majestic poem!
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