Ozone Laments

The creator gave me a big and wide blanket
to cover plenty families
to shield them from burning flame.

I did this successfully for many years
but now my blanket is full of holes
holes!produced by the sons of those I`m suppose
to protect and shield.

They pour chemicals on my blanket,
blanket!which is rare and very dear
my work is presently more difficult.

my blanket is now thinner and perforated,
burning flame now penetrates easily
causing lots of problems for the little ones.

stop fumigating me with this rubbish!,
I can`t take this any more,stop!I say stop!
so that I can complete my mission.



Olusegun Arowolo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Gasun Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 6:50 AM
An awesome piece which really deserved its great win! CONGRATULATIONS my dear friend, Olusegun! Thank you so much for sharing as well. And since somebody sent me a message, i'm passing it to you, Happy Friendship Day! Big sweet hugs! love lots, Leonora
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August 4, 2013 at 10:13 PM
Olusegun, , Congratulations, with your winning poem..... goodnight~ Linda
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August 4, 2013 at 5:28 PM
awesome win..>SKAT
Dietrich Avatar
November 1, 2012 at 2:23 PM
this is a great example of personification, having the sky talk to us! congrats on this one. I enjoyed it.
Sweetheart Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 3:31 PM
CONGRATS OLUSEGUN ON A GREAT WRITE AND WIN LUV ..
Poet Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 1:48 PM
Excellent poem with great personification Olusegun!Congrats on the win.
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October 30, 2012 at 11:26 AM
Congratulations on your winning poems in the "Good Enough" contest. - Oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Gasun Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 7:23 AM
Hmmmnnn,,,, so unique and fascinating to read! I love it! Congratulations on your win my dear Olusegun! hugs:)LG
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October 30, 2012 at 7:02 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in SandyIvy's "Good Enough" contest Olusegun. Love, Carol
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October 29, 2012 at 10:09 PM
This is a wonderful theme. congratulations on your win. Love, joyce
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October 29, 2012 at 8:24 PM
O.A.,, here to visit your poem again... congrats on your awesome win...pd
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October 29, 2012 at 7:22 PM
:-) love your good win' thank you' Sandy
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June 3, 2012 at 7:12 PM
OA,, Congratulations with your AWESOME "UNZIPPED LIPS” entry in NANCY'S CRAZY contest. ~always :-) PD
Williams Avatar
June 1, 2012 at 1:40 PM
Olusegun congrats on your win..David
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June 1, 2012 at 1:28 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the "unzipped Lips" contest Olusegun. Love, Carol
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May 31, 2012 at 7:11 PM
congrats on your win Olusegun
Song Avatar
May 31, 2012 at 6:45 PM
We are so unloving towards Mother Earth, aren't we! I keep waiting for the day that plastic bags will be banned from the stores here...I heard it happened in China...I know I got sidetracked! haha. This is great personification of the ozone layer...it is a heaven made blanket and now it seems to be showing its abuse...Such a wonderful theme for this contest and always thrilled to see your work shining! Thanks again for your help with my intoxicated pen! Owe my winning poem to you! :) Gwendolen
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May 31, 2012 at 6:24 PM
Wonderful poem, dear poet!!!
Jones Avatar
May 31, 2012 at 6:05 PM
holesholes! blanketblanket! rubbish! So compelling, being able to can complete.. love this write, olusegun, thanks so much for supporting my contest! Namaste ~N
Susan Avatar
May 28, 2012 at 5:31 PM
nice personification! good luck in the contest :) we could do without so many chemicals...
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May 23, 2012 at 5:12 AM
Interesting work..Enjoyed reading this morn..I am not exactly sure the interpertation that you intendedd one to have from the reading but sometimes live just wears us out and our blanket gets full of holes..We need to back off and recover so that we can get a new prospective about life..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara
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May 23, 2012 at 5:12 AM
Thanks for stopping by my work..Sara
Song Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 3:28 PM
Isn't it true that the ones you help the most are the ones that HURT you the most?...I bet this is exactly how our Heavenly Father must have felt too, O. This is beautiful with its metaphors! You are a missionary for sure! I am proud of you and your work! Please share it with me in more detail sometime! :) Hope your weekend is going well! love to u brother! Gwenodolen
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May 17, 2012 at 7:50 PM
I hope that people listen to pleas like this. We need to protect whati s so vital and so thin.
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