Oxidized

oxidized t r e l l i s w i l t e d noir roses intersect ~ q u i l t of the forlorn

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Krishnanand Guptar

Date: 5/13/2025 8:36:00 AM

Congratulations dear poetess on your top placement in this contest with a thoughtful write and a lovely twist "q u i l t of the forlorn". Wishing you a delightful day filled with the blessings of light.

Sara Jama
Date: 5/13/2025 5:27:00 PM

Thank you so much.

Ink Empress

Date: 5/10/2025 9:56:00 AM

I love “ quilt of the forlorn” and how youv written noir roses! A creative and well presented hiku again! I love it! You are soo good at these! I think you can do haibun very well too! Must try for a contest maybe! Pleasure reading! Sending you light

Sara Jama
Date: 5/11/2025 10:27:00 AM

Thank you for the kind words Ink.

Lin Lane

Date: 5/10/2025 7:01:00 AM

I read your message and like it, Sara. I just can't get into the form.

Sara Jama
Date: 5/11/2025 10:28:00 AM

Thank you very much.