Owls Night

Owls Night 

Masculine owl, brown metallic feathers, heavy winged
Sores the twilight ozone meadow
Traverses over waterways and banks of laden grass
Transforms, as from a trance, into the hunter
Haunting hoot tu-who sounds alert 
Between the silent grays of total black
Eclipsed and thunderous flap on flight ignites the hunt
Gliding, guided by precision giant eyes of wondrous yellow  
Gaining on the shadow of the mouse within its grasp
Scrambling to escape
Owl changes shape before attacking
Preys before he merges on this species
The specimen does not go unnoticed by another winged creature
A female owl of white, who feels an urge to flee, takes flight
Swoops down, takes the rodent in, before departing
No thinking on the wing and wind
No time to contemplate
Brown owl feels smarter than all that, a regular intellect, yet
Hovering up above, without his meal, there is regret
Mr. and Mrs. Owl will sort things out together 
Not in the nest or dead of night on meadows bog
But over dinner, consisting of the memory of mouse, no doubt


                    Created on 8/04/14 for Night Owl – Poetry contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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August 29, 2014 at 10:22 AM
THANK YOU FOR THE REPLY
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August 25, 2014 at 4:23 PM
Earl, , Congratulations, In Kelly's "Night Owl" contest. LINDA
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August 25, 2014 at 4:43 PM
Hi Linda, Thank you for commenting. Have a nice night. Take care. Earl
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August 25, 2014 at 12:10 PM
A very poetic writing about an ordinary happening in an owls life. Very nice Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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August 25, 2014 at 11:07 AM
Ah... A tag team match with the rodent... Smart old birds. Congrats on the win.
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August 25, 2014 at 11:44 AM
Hi Carol, Thank you. I hope you enjoyed my little birdie brained concept. Congratulations to you too on your fine win. Take care. Earl
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August 25, 2014 at 6:37 AM
Ahh, the life of an owl..well done and congrats. BG
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August 25, 2014 at 9:17 AM
Good morning Barbara, Thank you so much. Congratulations to you too on your fine win in this contest. Take care. Earl
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August 25, 2014 at 4:41 AM
wonderful description many congratulations on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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August 25, 2014 at 8:37 AM
Hi Jan. Thank you very much. Congratulations to you too for your excellent poem and win. Take care. Earl
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August 24, 2014 at 9:35 PM
I loved your excellent descriptions of the owl itself.... I also enjoyed the adventure of this powerful write! Congratulations on your win, Earl!
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August 25, 2014 at 8:50 AM
Good morning Kelly, Thank you so much for your kind words and for sponsoring this interesting contest. I appreciate your evaluation. Have a great day. Take care. Earl
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