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Overlooking the Fraser River

As i close my eyes and narrate my dream It would be my wish, my dream supreme We meet at Williams Lake in BC Canada Flying in from our corners of unhappiness As we drive to the mountains, to our wanting address We head for Mount Robson, through the Fraser Pass Our destination is a wonderful log cabin What a place to spend with your lass Our destination reached as we view our wooden heaven Surrounded by a carpet of virgin white snow Overlooking the Fraser River We settle and sit down with a nice wine In wonderment at the panorama before our eyes Knowing that it will be hard to ever say goodbye Our afternoon melts into our evening of wait As we dine to soft music Absorbing the moment as we catch each others glints We slow dance together, whispering in each others ears Our hands in adventure whilst our lips finally meet Telekinesis thoughts allow our clothing to drift Barefooted we are as we grace the oak wooden floors The roaring log fire captures our shadows As we kiss in song arriving at the hearth of warmth We bow to our knees naked as birth Barriers melted as our skins touch in want and desire Hands now like magnets, in caressing finesse Moment after moment we absorb our souls Against the fireside glow, we dance on the walls Undulating movements captured by inner enthral

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Date: 9/29/2014 1:53:00 AM
Beautiful sweet write Mr.James..:) you know what I like in your poetry you incorporate nature terms that is so appealing to the senses..:)
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Date: 9/30/2014 4:25:00 PM
Isn't the imagination wonderful, and within my thoughts I like to incorporate nature. She's the one for me, purely my mind, I'm just a different kind. Thank you Olive, James.......x
Date: 3/20/2010 3:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win, James. This is a nice place to dwell on the reality of your dreams. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 3/18/2010 4:28:00 PM
Congrats James on your winning poem and placement in the Dreams Come True contest.. a most wonderful write and win for u to so enjoy and be proud of this victory..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/18/2010 2:09:00 PM
Great write James. I think we may have had a similar vision in mind while dreaming!! Snow, wine a lovely home and a water feature!!! However, i love the detail in this one. (i did tell you that you are an inspiration to me!!)Gareth
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Date: 3/18/2010 1:41:00 PM
James~ Very passionate write Congratulations on your win in Carol's contest! Laura :)
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Date: 3/18/2010 12:32:00 PM
What a romantic soul you have, James. This beautiful poem is like a love story I've seen in some wonderful movie. A lovely poem...congratulations on your win! ~ Carrie
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Date: 3/18/2010 12:12:00 PM
Congratulations for your win, James. This is truly a beautiful dream. I'm knew it was a winner the first time I read it. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/18/2010 11:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win James in my contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/18/2010 11:41:00 AM
Nice use of imagery to share your dream. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Carol's contest. Way to go! Enjoy your success. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 2/28/2010 9:45:00 AM
I love it, James. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 2/28/2010 5:29:00 AM
You've a lovely mind on nature, and write well for your reader to 'see' the picture you paint whilst feeling the emotive pulls you encombas within too...mmm, lovely...
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Date: 2/27/2010 6:36:00 PM
Atmosphere .. throughout your lines and vivid lovely descriptions of a sweet seductive scenario.. graceful and tasteful James.. beautiful words ... luv.."Sweetheart"... off to find my Prince to make your words reality ...thankx...
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Date: 2/27/2010 6:18:00 PM
sensual
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Date: 2/27/2010 4:53:00 PM
Wow! What a wonderful dream! This is one river I would like to see with a romantic man at my side. Deliciously sensual, James. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/27/2010 4:45:00 PM
Sounds like the most romantic river view in the world. Keep the creative pen flowing, Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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Date: 2/27/2010 1:56:00 PM
Wow, James..I had that same dream last night...I wish....very sensual..;I love it. BG
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