Overgrown Sneakers

At early twelve,  motherly words echoed
Of the self,  becoming a lady one January eve.
No, it can’t happen, as a pale navel ached when
Another unintended milestone had begun—

Those rubber sneakers fondly overused died
On a  pink carpet, that I could not understand 
How unusually larger my almond eyes 
Woke a year after:  Tucking my dear book-
‘Neverending Story- ’   round hips  would prance
Through autumn rain    finding me at the junction
Of in-betweens ( kid and teenager),    confused …

I missed all overgrown sneakers,  even  PlayDoh
quivering in anticipation that... I might not belong.



( Not entered in any challenge)
Submitted to Brian Strand's Contest 530
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Pandit Avatar
December 23, 2018 at 7:27 AM
Back with congrats Nette for a win at the TOP of the podium.
Devonshire Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 9:55 PM
Very cute, Nette. Nice reflection on your childhood. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, Carolyn
Conte Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 1:56 PM
My special congratulations for winning the top spot in this contest!
Cornish Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 11:36 AM
Just seeing this! You didn't enter it...darn--it would have been among the top winners!
Callus Avatar
December 11, 2018 at 12:51 PM
Thank you for sharing some of your personal teenage feelings with us readers, Nette! Serious and witty at the same time. Hugs // paul
Arana Avatar
December 10, 2018 at 3:07 PM
Passing by to get some inspiration and I did. To be at the crossroad of teenage life can be challenging; especially when the hormones start kicking in. "Buds darting", I know the feeling. Astonishing poem!
Rose  Avatar
December 9, 2018 at 4:48 PM
Such a sensitive time of our life Netter, when we grow up and we look back, there are always a few treasures that stick out in our mind more luminous then yesterday's diner, Love you, have a wonderful evening. Hugs xo
Pandit Avatar
December 9, 2018 at 3:46 PM
A sensitive time of youth elegantly depicted..many can relate to your words..excellent, as always, nette.
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