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Overgrown Sneakers

At early twelve, motherly words echoed Of the self, becoming a lady one January eve. No, it can’t happen, as a pale navel ached when Another unintended milestone had begun— Those rubber sneakers fondly overused died On a pink carpet, that I could not understand How unusually larger my almond eyes Woke a year after: Tucking my dear book- ‘Neverending Story- ’ round hips would prance Through autumn rain finding me at the junction Of in-betweens ( kid and teenager), confused … I missed all overgrown sneakers, even PlayDoh quivering in anticipation that... I might not belong. ( Not entered in any challenge) Submitted to Brian Strand's Contest 530

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Date: 12/23/2018 7:27:00 AM
Back with congrats Nette for a win at the TOP of the podium.
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Date: 12/22/2018 9:55:00 PM
Very cute, Nette. Nice reflection on your childhood. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, Carolyn
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Date: 12/22/2018 1:56:00 PM
My special congratulations for winning the top spot in this contest!
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Date: 12/16/2018 11:36:00 AM
Just seeing this! You didn't enter it...darn--it would have been among the top winners!
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Date: 12/11/2018 12:51:00 PM
Thank you for sharing some of your personal teenage feelings with us readers, Nette! Serious and witty at the same time. Hugs // paul
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Date: 12/10/2018 3:07:00 PM
Passing by to get some inspiration and I did. To be at the crossroad of teenage life can be challenging; especially when the hormones start kicking in. "Buds darting", I know the feeling. Astonishing poem!
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Date: 12/9/2018 4:48:00 PM
Such a sensitive time of our life Netter, when we grow up and we look back, there are always a few treasures that stick out in our mind more luminous then yesterday's diner, Love you, have a wonderful evening. Hugs xo
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Date: 12/9/2018 3:46:00 PM
A sensitive time of youth elegantly depicted..many can relate to your words..excellent, as always, nette.
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