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Overcrowding

flutter of movement the bird balancing watches we’re blocking its view?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/13/2023 2:38:00 PM
Cool!
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Date: 2/10/2016 12:38:00 AM
Lorraine Ferns, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry, LINDA
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Date: 11/26/2014 6:37:00 PM
Nice, your poem catches the reader off balance!
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