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Over the Moon

one month after june an eagle lands on the moon stars and stripes festoon was sunday late afternoon neil the buzz and mankind swoon By David Kavanagh

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/14/2022 12:13:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful/Creative/Tribute" write to the Moon, Neil, Buzz and Mankind. Today, be blessed with your wonderful win...........

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/14/2022 1:18:00 PM

Thank you Paula, I just about scraped into the ratings, but hey it’s all just about having fun, and enjoying the writing, cheers David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2022 12:03:00 AM

a cute tribute this is, David. Nice way to get the word June used though it took place in July. Creative work. Congrats in my contest.

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/13/2022 12:24:00 AM

Thank you Andrea, I’m always delighted to get a placement, even though I tricked June to align it with the moon, cheers David

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/9/2022 10:56:00 AM

Beautiful tribute to the moon landing David! Best wishes for the contest with your very inventive tanka. Much said in a few syllables. Best wishes for the contest. Cheers! Toasting your tanka!

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/9/2022 12:16:00 PM

Thank you Sam for the endorsement of my tanka tribute, not sure if it’s what Andrea had in mind for her contest, but sure we’ll see how it goes, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/8/2022 1:57:00 PM

Great take on the contest theme, I remember it well David. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/8/2022 2:01:00 PM

Thank you Tom, What a day of celebration for mankind, really is hard to believe how they managed it, highly intelligent men with real courage and with no margin for error whatsoever, cheers David