Outsmarted Again

Banana sandwich
jam doughnut
well done steak
turn around to get a plate
from a rack

Gone!

Two little innocent faces 
and wagging tails stirring back.


Peter Dome.copyright.2013. Dec.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dome Avatar
December 15, 2013 at 1:27 PM
Ha ha, that is so clever and funny too friend . thank you so much, take care. best wishes. Pete,
Melugin Avatar
December 15, 2013 at 12:27 PM
Dog gone it! Peter, nice write!!! chuck
Thirtyseven Avatar
December 14, 2013 at 5:38 PM
Ah. dog poems, I have soft spot for them. Great piece, what fun.
Dome Avatar
December 15, 2013 at 2:50 AM
Me too, they make people so happy. Wasn't fun at the time friend, but now I see the funny side. Thank you so much.Anyone who lies animals can;y be bad. take care best wishes. Pete.
Guzzi Avatar
December 14, 2013 at 3:22 PM
You have tricky dogs I have a tricky cat he will eat almost anything last week I caught him eating my oatmeal? He even loves to chew on plastic? loves crackers, chocolate [which is BIG no no!] LOL Light & Love
Dome Avatar
December 15, 2013 at 2:57 AM
Hi Debbie, thank you so much for your kindness Love your cat story, my dogs eat anything too, What fun, take care. best wishes. Pete.
Dietrich Avatar
December 14, 2013 at 1:24 AM
hahaha, that was COOL!!!!
Dome Avatar
December 14, 2013 at 3:18 AM
Thank you so much Andrea. those naughty doggies, A packet of biscuits yesterday. think I'll eat out from now on. take care best wishes. Pete.
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December 12, 2013 at 3:34 AM
I've got a Labrador called Honey 'The Stomach', I hope your two culprits appreciate the effort that goes into your sandwiches. Funny write man, very cool. D.N.Read ;{)>
Dome Avatar
December 12, 2013 at 2:45 PM
Awe I love labs. Yes mine are very cunning and only eat the best. I had a mouse in the house once, ate me out of house and home. peanut butter., steak, fish, cake,cheese, chocolate, bacon,ended up being like a hotel. just punched the bait off the traps. sure it was laughing at me. When you get outsmarted by a tiny mouse. think I'll eat out from now on.. thank toy so much take care mate Pter Dome.
Sergi Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 6:00 PM
They are fast Peter, very funny
Dome Avatar
December 12, 2013 at 3:33 AM
Wasn't very funny at the time, I was looking forward to that sandwich. but they are so cute and can get away with anything. thank you so much take care. Pete. Now where's that sandwich gone?,.
Mehta Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 1:09 AM
Very funny and humorous write, Peter
Dome Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 4:58 AM
Thank you so much friend. I really appreciate your kind comments. glad you enjoyed it.. wish I had enjoyed the food. take care best wishes. Peter Dome.
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