Outsinging the Relatives

She was turning eighty so I sent in the birds with a word.
The happy birthday singers, whose trills were absurd.
They outsang her relatives, they outsang the bee.
They outsang her husband, but they could not outsing me.
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Hankins Avatar
July 23, 2022 at 11:09 AM
A cute one, Caren. And I thought you said you had no musical talent!
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July 23, 2022 at 5:46 PM
I forgot to add that although not talented, I am LOUD.
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