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Outside the City

Outside the ancient city where the pomegranates grow, one walks into another world on distant shores from long ago; a grave of stone and marble... monuments that stand to guard the saddened ghosts of ancient souls on broken land. These great artistic wonders, seen in scattered disarray, of columns standing tall, but others toppled, lay so scattered on the fields on which they proudly stood. The works of Persian, Greek and Roman empires should in clear view proudly lie for all to honor and behold... the history of centuries that here for all unfolds. Outside, now fairly modern, the Turkish city of Izmir... the old historic Pergamon... lies bare to see, revere, besides its world bygone that here existed long ago, outside the ancient city where the pomegranates grow. Sandra M. Haight ~6th Place Contest: On Distant Shores Sponsor: Robert Haigh Judged: 07/22/2018 ~Honorable Mention~ Premiere Contest: A First Line Prompt Sponsor: Julia Ward Judged: 05/03/2016 Izmir is noted for farming and selling pomegranates Since my visit there twenty-three years ago, I learned that many of the ruins have been restored.

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Date: 6/24/2018 12:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem. Your imagery is always extraordinary. :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/1/2018 2:39:00 PM
Thank you very much, Susan! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 6/22/2018 10:16:00 AM
Being a bit of a history buff, this one really resonates with me, Sandra. You always make it look so easy, yet I know it's not. I love it:)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/1/2018 2:40:00 PM
Thank you very much, Daniel! Sandra
Date: 6/22/2018 8:08:00 AM
EXCELLENT, Sandra. CONGRATS! Janice
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/1/2018 2:38:00 PM
Thank you very much, Janice! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/4/2016 5:58:00 AM
I am glad that this poem contest linked in with your memories of visiting Izmir. Congratulations for doing well in my contest.
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Julia Ward
Date: 5/5/2016 9:49:00 AM
Good luck in my current contest about "Nothingness". Best wishes, Julia
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Julia Ward
Date: 5/5/2016 9:46:00 AM
Hi Sandra, Yes the first line opens the way to exoticism, and your way of expressing the rest of the poem is equally wonderful.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/4/2016 6:58:00 AM
Hi Julia, thank you so much for offering such an inspirational contest where the interpretation of your theme could offer so many different poems. I am so pleased that you enjoyed my poem, and I thank you for my placement in your contest. I am hoping to enter your current one. Thanks again, Sandra
Date: 5/3/2016 12:28:00 PM
A lovely write Sandra, loved the historic touch...Congrats on your win
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/3/2016 6:16:00 PM
Thank you very much, Joseph. I appreciate your visit, nice comment and congrats! Sandra
Date: 4/21/2016 12:38:00 PM
This is a most impressive write recalling the glory of ancient empires and the monuments that now remain. A masterpiece and definitely a winner! Warmest regards. Pandita
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/21/2016 2:21:00 PM
Dear Pandita, thank you so much for stopping by with your uplifting comment and support! Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/21/2016 10:41:00 AM
Wonderful entry Sandra, good luck in the contest...
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/21/2016 2:20:00 PM
Hi Charlie, thank you so much once again. I appreciate your encouraging comments and good luck wishes for the contest. Sandra
Date: 4/21/2016 10:10:00 AM
Beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/21/2016 2:19:00 PM
Thank you again, BL. I am always encouraged by your uplifting visits and nice comments. Sandra

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