Outside the City


Outside the ancient city 
where the pomegranates grow,
one walks into another world
on distant shores from long ago;
a grave of stone and marble... 
monuments that stand
to guard the saddened ghosts 
of ancient souls on broken land.

These great artistic wonders, 
seen in scattered disarray,
of columns standing tall, 
but others toppled, lay
so scattered on the fields 
on which they proudly stood.

The works of Persian, Greek 
and Roman empires should
in clear view proudly lie 
for all to honor and behold...
the history of centuries 
that here for all unfolds.

Outside, now fairly modern, 
the Turkish city of Izmir...
the old historic Pergamon... 
lies bare to see, revere,
besides its world bygone
that here existed long ago,
outside the ancient city 
where the pomegranates grow.


Sandra M. Haight

~6th Place
Contest: On Distant Shores
Sponsor: Robert Haigh
Judged: 07/22/2018

~Honorable Mention~
Premiere Contest: A First Line Prompt
Sponsor: Julia Ward
Judged: 05/03/2016

Izmir is noted for farming and selling pomegranates
Since my visit there twenty-three years ago, I learned that 
many of the ruins have been restored.
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Gentry Avatar
June 24, 2018 at 12:14 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem. Your imagery is always extraordinary. :)
Haight Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 2:39 PM
Thank you very much, Susan! Hugs, Sandra
Turner Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 10:16 AM
Being a bit of a history buff, this one really resonates with me, Sandra. You always make it look so easy, yet I know it's not. I love it:)
Haight Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 2:40 PM
Thank you very much, Daniel! Sandra
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June 22, 2018 at 8:08 AM
EXCELLENT, Sandra. CONGRATS! Janice
Haight Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 2:38 PM
Thank you very much, Janice! Hugs, Sandra
Ward Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 5:58 AM
I am glad that this poem contest linked in with your memories of visiting Izmir. Congratulations for doing well in my contest.
Ward Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 9:49 AM
Good luck in my current contest about "Nothingness". Best wishes, Julia
Ward Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 9:46 AM
Hi Sandra, Yes the first line opens the way to exoticism, and your way of expressing the rest of the poem is equally wonderful.
Haight Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 6:58 AM
Hi Julia, thank you so much for offering such an inspirational contest where the interpretation of your theme could offer so many different poems. I am so pleased that you enjoyed my poem, and I thank you for my placement in your contest. I am hoping to enter your current one. Thanks again, Sandra
May Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 12:28 PM
A lovely write Sandra, loved the historic touch...Congrats on your win
Haight Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 6:16 PM
Thank you very much, Joseph. I appreciate your visit, nice comment and congrats! Sandra
Sietesantos Avatar
April 21, 2016 at 12:38 PM
This is a most impressive write recalling the glory of ancient empires and the monuments that now remain. A masterpiece and definitely a winner! Warmest regards. Pandita
Haight Avatar
April 21, 2016 at 2:21 PM
Dear Pandita, thank you so much for stopping by with your uplifting comment and support! Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra
Smith Avatar
April 21, 2016 at 10:41 AM
Wonderful entry Sandra, good luck in the contest...
Haight Avatar
April 21, 2016 at 2:20 PM
Hi Charlie, thank you so much once again. I appreciate your encouraging comments and good luck wishes for the contest. Sandra
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April 21, 2016 at 10:10 AM
Beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Haight Avatar
April 21, 2016 at 2:19 PM
Thank you again, BL. I am always encouraged by your uplifting visits and nice comments. Sandra
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