Outside My Window

Fall
A great time to sheepishly peer out 
Of my time worn window
The window that gives me splinters if I look too close
But if I take the time to see past the splinters 
And age 
I see the beauty of my back yard 
That was once a field of dirt
and weeds 
Fall
A great time to sheepishly peer out 
Of my time worn window
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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March 25, 2016 at 2:01 PM
Hi, Jack, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
Inman Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 2:14 PM
Nice write.
A. Sharma Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 12:10 AM
Very wonderful take on the theme Jack! Congrats on a fantastic win!
A  Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 11:04 PM
Jack, Congrats in Bev Smith's, contest. Hugs **SKAT**
La France Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 12:42 PM
Jack, wonderfully penned verse, I truly enjoyed it and thanks for visiting my poem, Frigidaire .. yes a very odd theme, honestly one has to wonder, why with so many possible beautiful themes that could be used ...
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