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Outside My Window

The wind is blowing All the leaves spreading On the backyard lawn On the wooden deck Are a few leaves stuck Only moving when- The wind is blowing One leaf I noticed I am drawn to it The shape of a hand Staring at it-I notice Two fingers and thumb This is a leaf stuck In the crack of the deck

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/12/2018 9:43:00 PM

And it makes me wonder! -- "Stairway to Heaven," by Lead Zeppelin :) gw

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/15/2018 1:20:00 PM

Hello Gershon Wolf, It always makes me wonder as well.Have a nice day my friend.

Charles Messina

Date: 11/4/2018 9:02:00 PM

Dear Darlene De Beaulieu, I have pictured that leaf as if were laying on my back porch. It's funny how a single leaf is much like a single cloud. Our imaginations can take us to wonderful places. Have a lovely evening...Charlie

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/8/2018 6:19:00 PM

Hello Charles I did see this leaf as two fingers and a thumb. Sometimes i do see other things. around me. My imafination can take me far. Have a nice evening my friend.

Marc Acrich

Date: 11/2/2018 6:33:00 PM

I can see you are good at casting a mood Feels like autumn https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZEMCeymW1Ow

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/3/2018 1:20:00 PM

Hello Marc,this is what i have seen outside my window. Have a nice day my friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/2/2018 4:20:00 PM

- I enjoy your view in your window, Darlene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/2/2018 6:12:00 PM

Hello Sunshine Smile, it makes me happy to know that you enjoy the view in my window. Hugs Darlene///

Chris Green

Date: 11/1/2018 12:16:00 PM

This was beautiful my friend. I could see this as I read it.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/1/2018 5:19:00 PM

Hello Chris, I saw this as I was creating this poem. It is amazing what you can see outside the window. Have a nice evening my friend. PEACE, LOVE, & JOY ALWAYS.

Mike Gentile

Date: 11/1/2018 8:40:00 AM

It' funny how something so small and incidental catches our fascination, isn't it Darlene. Great imagery xxoo

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/1/2018 11:31:00 AM

Hello Mike,yes it is amazing how little things catches the eye.No not imagery, I have seen it on the deck.It stood out for me to see. Have a nice day my friend. xxxx-ooooo.