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when I last looked snow sprawled in like an embrace from a foreign world outdoor walk suspended by squabbles of sleeted wet unappealing chords of ice pellets that stand hair on edge to coat a hatless head in splinters force that shapes a winter's pace implanted temper abrasions in tracks of snow as February squeezes into loins an ache my icy fingers trace the window, vaporized a shield of separation a pledge of freedom re-booted like green paths rising a shifting focus till March tramps into place month of mis-rule ornamental promise that a turnstile world clangs change when I next look to turn the page Poem written February 23, 2023

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Date: 3/22/2023 11:25:00 AM
A lovely write. I wish you would write more. Have a wonderful day writing away.....................
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 3/22/2023 11:33:00 AM
Greetings Paula Thank you for your encouraging note. I often begin another poem for a contest, but then I miss contest deadline + the poem is shuttered. I suppose that I should let the work surface. Be well dear lady. Sincerely, Brian
Date: 2/23/2023 12:19:00 PM
Great imagery here, Brian. Brrr...you made me cold though (lol) Heard you had some bad weather.. be safe my friend. Where I live in NJ we had all but just a dusting thus far, by this time we should have had several inches. I'm not complaining though, I'd rather face the cold than the snow any day of the week. Great write! Charlie
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 2/23/2023 12:27:00 PM
Hello Charlie, Thanks greatly for your stop by + positive take on my poem. Unfortunately I fell yesterday on black ice covered by snow. My second fall this winter. A sizable storm over 2 days, with more to come next week. Winter still has teeth. Be well. Cheers, Brian
Date: 2/23/2023 11:14:00 AM
great descriptions as always and I esp love the opening stanza... :)
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 2/23/2023 11:20:00 AM
My appreciation, Susan, for your thoughtful appraisal of my small piece on a winter storm. An ice encrusted layer over tenacious snow that still falls as I write. Sincerest regards, Brian
Date: 2/23/2023 10:23:00 AM
Wonderful imagery that really grabs the imagination. I love it.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 2/23/2023 11:16:00 AM
Greetings Peter, Thank you very much for your stop by and affirmative message. We've just been hit by a winter blast that brittle the bones. Be well. Brian

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