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"Out to Sea" In the immediate times we rush to consume it all before it is all swallowed, and out it all comes salty, like an Ocean pummelling our crumbling sures eating away our solidarity insouciantly the sandy impermanent escarpment caves in on our gossamer dissolving world and in the eye of the storm in the middle of it all for a small moment all is calm while the catastrophes move blithely around us, hitting us brashly like we’ve been hit on a caffeine high we are simultaneously aware of time standing still and then, the swift pull of a rug unceremoniously out beneath our feet some strange gravity slides towards that ridiculous prophecised inevitability of kingdoms come and gone we thought we knew everything the truth is we were the dumb awake knowing little of everything and much of what mattered little and all as one we are drowned soundly, gladly, like into an open-eyed baptismal grave we are forever and ever naked as a child washed clean out to sea Candide Diderot. ‘25

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Date: 3/7/2025 7:25:00 AM
Dear Candide, a wild and crazy ride! I know that there is so much chaos existing in our times. I loved how you've mixed the ocean bantering with our crazy modern life. I think we're all getting dunked in this galactic bathtub coming out fresh but totally exposed. A Fav!! Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 3/7/2025 8:56:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 3/7/2025 3:22:00 AM
"Before the Crashing Waves"/Elysian Fields
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Date: 3/7/2025 3:42:00 AM
https://youtu.be/EW61YNLo6mQ?si=za6Syai3wKYho6N4
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Date: 3/7/2025 3:41:00 AM
LYRICS. "Before the Crashing Waves"/Elysian Fields (Jennifer Charles).
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Date: 3/7/2025 3:41:00 AM
https://genius.com/Elysian-fields-before-the-crashing-waves-lyrics

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