Out to Sea

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"Out to Sea"

In the immediate times 
we rush to consume it all 
before it is all swallowed, and out it all comes salty,
like an Ocean pummelling our crumbling sures 
eating away our solidarity
insouciantly the sandy impermanent escarpment caves in
on our gossamer dissolving world

and in the eye of the storm 
in the middle of it all 
for a small moment all is calm 
while the catastrophes move blithely around us, 
hitting us brashly like we’ve been hit on a caffeine high 
we are simultaneously aware of time standing still and then,
the swift pull of a rug unceremoniously out beneath our feet

some strange gravity slides 
towards that ridiculous prophecised inevitability
of kingdoms come and gone
we thought we knew everything
the truth is we were the dumb awake
knowing little of everything
and much of what mattered little

and all as one 
we are drowned soundly, gladly, 
like into an open-eyed baptismal grave

we are forever and ever 
naked as a child
washed clean 

out to sea




Candide Diderot. ‘25 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 3/7/2025 7:25:00 AM
Dear Candide, a wild and crazy ride! I know that there is so much chaos existing in our times. I loved how you've mixed the ocean bantering with our crazy modern life. I think we're all getting dunked in this galactic bathtub coming out fresh but totally exposed. A Fav!! Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 3/7/2025 8:56:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 3/7/2025 3:22:00 AM
"Before the Crashing Waves"/Elysian Fields
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Date: 3/7/2025 3:42:00 AM
https://youtu.be/EW61YNLo6mQ?si=za6Syai3wKYho6N4
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Date: 3/7/2025 3:41:00 AM
LYRICS. "Before the Crashing Waves"/Elysian Fields (Jennifer Charles).
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Date: 3/7/2025 3:41:00 AM
https://genius.com/Elysian-fields-before-the-crashing-waves-lyrics
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