Notes About The Poem

Out To Please

There was a top chef called McRoth
Who made a delicious fish broth,
And to please Mrs Jones
Who had phobia of bones
He sieved it through layers of cloth! 

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For a Limerick contest
Hosted by Robert Haigh
       Placed 5th
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Michaels Avatar
November 7, 2018 at 12:18 PM
Great limerick, Paul. Not a fan of fish bones, myself so I'd need to sieve it, too!! Congrats on your win. Regards, John.
Callus Avatar
November 7, 2018 at 1:24 PM
Thank you, John. Fish bones can be tricky to deal with, so it's best to be safe than sorry:) Regards // paul
Rodd Avatar
September 8, 2018 at 8:41 AM
Cute! (although I had to bypass the " fish head soup" pic rather quickly!! )
Callus Avatar
September 10, 2018 at 2:23 AM
Thank you, Gayle. Sorry about the head...meant to take it out before serving:) Regards // paul
Juman Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 8:43 AM
Excellent write
Callus Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 4:37 PM
Thank you Al. Pleased to make your acquaintance. Regards // paul
Manassian Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 4:56 PM
Great limerick, my dear. I don't have much to say about a fish broth as you know I'm vegetarian.... ;)
Callus Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 7:29 AM
Thank you, Eileen. I'm not really a meat eater as I believe that meat is not a healthy option, but I love fish and vegetables. Hugs // paul
Thomas Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 10:55 PM
Good advice given awesomely! ;)
Callus Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 4:23 PM
Thank you, Flo. Always a pleasure to have you visiting :) Warm regards // paul
Williams Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 7:59 AM
My son has a phobia of fish bones, good tip from Chef McRoth, think I'll give it a try. Great limerick Paul, and congratulations on your placement....Maria hugs
Callus Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 2:09 PM
It is wise to be careful of fish bones, Maria; what might be funny in the poem could turn out to be fatal. Thank you for enjoying, and for the congrats. Hugs // paul
Ashley Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 3:26 PM
Your limericks are always sure to please and amuse me with smiling satisfaction, Paul. A tastefully witty write, my wonderful friend :)) Congratulations on your placement. Warmest wishes and hugs always. ~Susan
Callus Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 2:06 PM
I'm so pleased my poem brought you a smile of satisfaction, Susan :) Main aim achieved! Thank you for your delightful comments. ~ Warm regards & hugs // paul
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 5:13 PM
A joy to read your Limerick! One of my favourite writes. Congratulations! Stay bright.
Callus Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 11:40 AM
And it's a joy to read your comments, Besma:) Thank you. Regards & Blessings // paul
Tripp Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 8:29 PM
Ha! I'm not sure it's the bones that would creep me out as much as the whole head in my soup! Great write. Fun!
Callus Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 9:31 AM
That picture was intentional, Rhoda...meant to keep people away from my fish soup:) Thank you for stopping by. Regards // paul
Wigley Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 2:27 AM
Excellent, Paul, fun, and a handy hint for us amateur chefs, too! regards, Viv
Callus Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 4:48 AM
Thank you, Viv. I am sure that Mrs Jones isn't the only one with a phobia of bones. Regards // paul
Lamoureux Avatar
April 28, 2018 at 8:42 AM
My pleasure to drop by Paul.
Callus Avatar
April 28, 2018 at 4:51 PM
You're always welcome Richard :)
Krampe Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 9:00 PM
that was very thoughtful of him. Congrats, Paul.
Callus Avatar
April 28, 2018 at 5:14 PM
Thank you, Agnes; you look out for the good points:) Regards // paul
George   Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 8:27 AM
It made me laugh! Good one, Paul.
Callus Avatar
April 28, 2018 at 10:30 AM
Thank you, Elaine. Best regards // paul
Talbot Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 10:54 AM
A top spot for me, congratulations Paul
Callus Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 12:08 PM
You're too kind, Mick:) Thank you. Regards // paul
Haight Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 10:51 AM
Too funny, Paul! A great Limerick, and congrats on your fine placement! Sandra :)
Callus Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 11:28 AM
Thank you Sandra. Glad you enjoyed it:) Regards // paul
Lamoureux Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 8:58 AM
Cute and considerate.
Callus Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 11:14 AM
Thank you, Richard. Pleased to have you stopping by. Regards // paul
Hay Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 7:49 AM
Hahaha, s(o)uperb :) , congrats too for this fun limerick Paul. Warm regards, Laura.
Callus Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 11:05 AM
I love to hear tinkling laughter, Laura:) Enjoyed your s(o)uperb comments:) ~ Warm regards // paul
Gentry Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 4:33 AM
Congratulations on your win Paul with this delightful fun limerick. Wells done!
Callus Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 11:02 AM
Your congrats and delightful comments are appreciated, Susan...thank you! Regards // paul
Onclaud Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 1:04 AM
such a delight with that humorous ending, paul... big congrats right down to the bones.. huggs
Callus Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 10:51 AM
Thank you for a pleasant visit, Nette:) Hugs // paul
Gupta Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 7:52 PM
Hahaha ... Many an angle of thought with the wonderful Limerick ... Regards ... Probir ...
Callus Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 10:39 AM
So pleased you got a laugh out of it, Probir...thank you. Regards // paul
Gauthier Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 7:19 PM
Congrats on your win, Paul.
Callus Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 10:18 AM
Pleased you like it, Line...thank you! Regards // paul
Dietrich Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 6:39 PM
I was surprised, Paul, and very happy. Thanks for your congrats below.
Callus Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 10:12 AM
You merited it, Andrea:) By the way...I replaced the word 'Dutch' by 'top'; 2 'ch's next to each other don't sound right! (I'm fussy that way!!).
Allison Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 5:56 PM
Fabulous limerick Paul, many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
Callus Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 10:11 AM
Many thanks, Jan:) Hope all is well on the western front. Hugs // paul
Rodrigues Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 4:06 PM
Nicely done, Paul! Congrats!
Callus Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 4:58 PM
Glad you enjoyed, Kim...thank you! Regards // paul
Dietrich Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 3:32 PM
It placed pretty well. Congratulations!
Callus Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 4:57 PM
Thank you, Andrea. Had not realized that the result was already available! Big congrats to you for placing first! Regards // paul
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