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Out On the Porch (4)

Cold gray windy rain With the scent of dill from boxes Quiet except for chimes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/6/2009 6:28:00 AM
its still on us
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Date: 10/5/2009 10:52:00 AM
nicely penned
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Date: 10/5/2009 8:15:00 AM
You took me with you...watching the gray day unfold... Carrie
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Date: 10/5/2009 6:12:00 AM
sitting on my front porch dancing to your wind song Sara....EXCELLENT Haiku.......:JP]
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Date: 10/5/2009 5:35:00 AM
Lovely, rainy day poem Sara. Thank you for your comments on my new haikus also. ~Trudy~
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