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True story from my son-in-law. His basement is not where I'd want to be alone..deer heads and a bobcat!!

The bobcat is following gram. She senses lit eyes that won’t scram. There’s feet on the path, A gun with grand’s wrath. The bobcat on wall, he can’t scram.

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Date: 6/15/2025 7:03:00 AM
LOL Kim Congratulations! :)
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Date: 6/14/2025 10:46:00 AM
Kim, CONGRATS on your win! Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/14/2025 5:01:00 PM
Thank you, Janice!
Date: 6/14/2025 8:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win dear friend in this contest with a pleasant picturesque write. Wishing you a cheerful weekend.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/14/2025 8:23:00 AM
Thank you Krishnanand!
Date: 6/14/2025 7:33:00 AM
Very nicely penned Kim, Congrats on your win
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/14/2025 8:23:00 AM
Thanks, Joe!
Date: 6/12/2025 4:47:00 AM
Great lim Kim. Good one for the contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/12/2025 5:07:00 AM
Thank you, Oliver!
Date: 6/11/2025 9:20:00 PM
Great lim, Kim, lol <-- it rhymed. Scary real stuff-Yikes!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/12/2025 5:07:00 AM
Right?! Not your everyday stalking…lol!
Date: 6/11/2025 1:10:00 PM
It's funny to imagine being in the dark with those awful things staring at you! ha.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/11/2025 2:41:00 PM
Yes!
Date: 6/11/2025 7:36:00 AM
- We rented a cabin in the mountains once... it was full of animals on the walls and other places... not something I would want in my house - "my" animals walk alive in my garden (and eat my flowers) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/11/2025 11:23:00 AM
When I was a child, our next door neighbor had a deer head. I’ve still never been partial to seeing them on the walls. I guess to each his own. ((hugs))
Date: 6/11/2025 6:31:00 AM
You were inspired, I enjoyed where that inspiration took your pen. So far, I got nothing but know inspiration is always brewing in me and trust it will deliver something fully perked, maybe not in time though!! No worries. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/11/2025 7:03:00 AM
Thank you! Hope inspiration strikes :) hugs
Date: 6/10/2025 6:10:00 PM
Ha, ha! A granny in the image of Irene Ryan on the Beverly Hillbilles! Granny, go get your gun! :) gw
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 6/11/2025 6:33:00 AM
Where in the world has Gershon stored her name for so many decades? With a gun to my head, I couldn't come up with it. He has an impressive remember-er. CayCay
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/10/2025 7:03:00 PM
LOL!
Date: 6/10/2025 5:57:00 PM
Good one!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/10/2025 7:03:00 PM
Thank you, Karen!
Date: 6/10/2025 5:45:00 PM
HA! What a weird sense of humor, lol-
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/10/2025 7:10:00 PM
Ha…lol!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/10/2025 7:03:00 PM
Ha…lol!

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