Out of Tune

twang-ang-ang-ang-ang-ang-ang! Jarring, the effect. Good senryu, Harry

Top of the Day to you hh - Hi. As I love music I turned to this entry. I found it two fold. Yes of life and her ways and yes to the strings itself. Both are well stated. May this day find you well and safe. PS - may music and life play on.

Deep xx

That's beautifully written... Great write

i wuz getting into your write dear poet, until...your violin's string broke! *sm...have a great week sir...much love, james

Harry, WOW! So well written. All the best~ Warren.

wow, this is FANTASTIC haiku . A fave.

Humanity is orchestrated by the rich and powerful - but they must know, they are treading a fine line. Hugs and blessings Harry, Jennifer.

Bit like here with recent POTD

pithy comment on human Be-ing! shalom shalom Sir Harry. Thanks much

Ohhhh That would be horrible in the middle of a recital. Great job here Harry. Very imaginative. God Bless, JB

I read a story once about a famous violin performer who was onstage to give a concert and his strings began to pop one at time. He ended up doing the concert with only one string which moved the audience to tears. Yes, we as people are breaking the strings of that violin. I enjoyed reading this one. I can hear the tune turn sour but then the master player gets it right back on track. Your visit to my page was encouraging. Sara

Before it broke I hope it played a beautiful haunting tune. I love the Violin, I have an old copy cat at home of a Stradavarious :)

Excellent Senryu, Harry. profound thoughts in three brilliant lines. BW ~ Mala

Oh well, the show must go on. A very fine senryu, Harry. :)

Perfect Senyru Harry. I am glad I was led to this. Take care :)

It's a philosophy in nutshell. I always love your poems.

maybe we should just replace the strings before they snap in mid solo....

Yes Harry,accidents do happen to the best laid plans

Not a good sign!

Hi, Harry! The level of sadness, I guess, depends on how a reader defines “the people” herein…a group on a street or Humanity in total. True and sad either way, but the vaster moves to tears. Have you ever read any of Will Durant’s volumes of history? You wrote a volume right here, needing to be read.

i think many are at breaking point Harry:-( hugs Jan xx

I like the turn in ending line. Well written, Harry.

Mankind cannot think straight, so we are a broken lot.

With mankinds stupidity I think many more will break and then we're in big trouble. Tom