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Out of Touch

My friends think I am better They think I am fine But they have no idea I can not put her behind I still dream about her Day and night She was my everything Now I am left with fright I told her all the right words But she still didn't know That I felt strong for her To her, my heart I'd bestow I am afraid I can never make it right I am afraid I can never find a girl One that can make happy And throw me for a whirl She was my all She meant so much She is drifting away Out of touch

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Ginger Marie

Date: 11/4/2009 5:38:00 AM

It's tough, but you'll find someone better. The way it sounds, you were worth the fight, she just doesn't understand what she's missing. Nice rhymes, by the way.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 11/3/2009 8:14:00 PM

It is always hard to let go of a wonderful thing. So, tell you what, you turn your thoughts around and get that wonderful you out and see what happens. When the time is right, love will find you again. Very nicely written. Thank you for sharing. Caroline.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/3/2009 7:53:00 PM

Keep searching, Matthan, and you will find the right girl who will make you happy. At times like these you describe, it's hard to hold onto hope, but it helps us move forward. And we can never really go back, though sometimes relationships can be restored on a stronger foundation of understanding. Very heartfelt write! Love, Carolyn