Matthan Atherton Poet Rhyme

Out of Touch

My friends think I am better
They think I am fine
But they have no idea
I can not put her behind

I still dream about her
Day and night
She was my everything
Now I am left with fright

I told her all the right words
But she still didn't know
That I felt strong for her
To her, my heart I'd bestow

I am afraid I can never make it right
I am afraid I can never find a girl
One that can make happy
And throw me for a whirl

She was my all
She meant so much
She is drifting away
Out of touch

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Ginger Marie November 4, 2009 at 5:38 AM It's tough, but you'll find someone better. The way it sounds, you were worth the fight, she just doesn't understand what she's missing. Nice rhymes, by the way.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix November 3, 2009 at 8:14 PM It is always hard to let go of a wonderful thing. So, tell you what, you turn your thoughts around and get that wonderful you out and see what happens. When the time is right, love will find you again. Very nicely written. Thank you for sharing. Caroline.

Carolyn Devonshire November 3, 2009 at 7:53 PM Keep searching, Matthan, and you will find the right girl who will make you happy. At times like these you describe, it's hard to hold onto hope, but it helps us move forward. And we can never really go back, though sometimes relationships can be restored on a stronger foundation of understanding. Very heartfelt write! Love, Carolyn