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Out of the Box

The moment I am out of the box
Foxes and hyenas surround me
Needy greedy aggressive seekers
Those who even a second before
Lay hidden in hibernation
In the tightly closed boxes of steel
On the verge of elimination
Thanks to the cultural policing

Now pouncing for dark and dense satisfaction
In a paleolithic plunder
Quenching reddening hunger
In the black and brown forest 
Of unchained unrest
In pursuance of almost unconquerable
And incorruptible pleasure principle 
Of animal happiness

Night and day
Sense buds making hay
Out of the aesthetic box
Wreaking senseless havoc
Our rose and rhododendrons in decay
Our seagulls 
In infirmary and hospitals

Out of the box
The Spanish bull and ox
Flummox our poems
Into the imagery of
Ingrained instancy
For our tumultuous ascendancy
On the pinnacle
Of crimson churning 
And the giant jingling 
Tapering off to
The momentary Nirvana
Of the 
Intense distraction
That arose out of the box
A moment later
In an inertia again
Of the restless vein
For the overwhelming rain
Into deep brain
Teeming with craving lanes and bye lanes
In the dim light delight

Out of box
The red fox
No mailbox
No riverine knocks

The box is very important
For our civilization
Into the flowers
Of sunny sublimation
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18/01/2017
For the contest, How Long Can A Poetry Go,
Sponsor, Jamie Pan
Note: As the metaphors in the poem is too obvious to need explanation, no writer’s
Statement is added here, as asked for by the sponsor except saying that it deals with the psychological process of the dominance of pleasure principles at the cost of reality principles as elucidated by Sigmund Freud.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/18/2017 11:07:00 AM
Well done Probir, best wishes in the contest...
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/18/2017 12:06:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie ... probir ...
Date: 1/18/2017 9:13:00 AM
Make certain my friend to copyright your poem for, I am afraid, Freund might try to claim it as his own! Excellent and a seven!
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Date: 1/18/2017 12:07:00 PM
Haha ... thank you, dear friend ... probir ...
Date: 1/18/2017 4:14:00 AM
Well stated my friend and good luck in the contest.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/18/2017 4:26:00 AM
Thank you, Phil ... probir ...
Date: 1/18/2017 4:08:00 AM
- A really well written poem for this contest, Probir - The theme in this poem gives deeper meaning, what is behind the external action or depiction - A 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/18/2017 4:27:00 AM
Thank you, Anne ... probir

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