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Out of the Blue Part 2 Poetic Justice

I could have fell flat on my face when I slumped into that hellish place but hell no, it's not my way to give up like it's my death day. At first it was hard to breathe understand or believe why'd they leave me out & ditch me the bastards I was an outcast and not part of the script cast aside and I flipped but I'm made of iron & pride though admittedly at first stunned with mouth open wide It made me never more angry and upset, yeah I cried, especially as I tried to see inside their mind, binded by DNA so not blind to how I'm portrayed as their thoughts I pried. But hey, I realised without doubt I was unwanted & with that sighted ambitious flames ignited so I decided to go it alone in my stride & not let fear strike as to never again be frightened on this new mission I'm fighting on despite your plight of spite. It's not impolite to say our bond is set aside set a light wrecked by the disrespect & rejection causing its demise I chose to be wise & seek out a talent a subject never attempted & try what I hadn't so I would not be bad tempered & if I was decent I'd pursue perfection & never again blubber a tear or two by you. I set out to start new & just see what I could do what I found no one ever knew a poetic discovery used as a therapy for recovery after it felt like the pain of a worst fear you branded on me after you left me abandoned & stranded unforgivably disbanded by my own band of brother & sister, repeatedly, but I curse here in this instant to let it indent that the distance before made forgetting you easy with no resistance. There's been a disappearance of our bond broken through miss use, repair is beyond we need a magic wand, you turned me into a mister that you never knew no wait I miss spoke I'm a bloke that's more true than you & never again will you hurt me like you used to. I longed for that invite but you wronged me, are you up tight, are you clever & I'm not bright? Don't answer, I don't give a s***e because I'm strong from your wrong & flew from a pit upto where I belong but I'm not here by right, I'm here 'cus I fight with flames that you ignited so you can do your little just us holidays leave me out you gave me poetic justice honestly making this skill come about so thanks for not including me I mean that truthfully I'm thankful you were rude to me, I'm glad it's how it had to be now you have holidays in your memory, the best gift went to me, I was blessed with a drive and unseen poetic ability.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/23/2018 10:33:00 AM
No apologise needed Nick, you can choose your friends, shame you cant choose your family. Great verse , keep writing. Tom.
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Nick Trim
Date: 10/23/2018 11:27:00 AM
Thanks Tom, friends are the family you choose as they say, things aren't to bad but things happened and from a bad experience I gained poetry, so, silver linings I guess :) Thanks again
Date: 10/23/2018 3:00:00 AM
sorry about the layout, couldnt fit comas and full stops in due to too many characters
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