Out Of My League

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Creative, intelligent, some would say wise. Beautiful with a personality twice her size. She’d never give me a second look, I’d just as soon sit here and read my book. Maybe she loves sports, that would be a surprise.

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Charles Messina

Date: 7/27/2025 9:01:00 AM

LOL- that would be a NICE surprise! Great limerick, Bill. Hope all is well my Tx. friend. -CM

Bill Baker
Date: 7/27/2025 10:08:00 AM

Thanks, Charles, all's well here in Texas. Have a pleasant day, my friend, Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 7/26/2025 4:09:00 PM

I think she loves sports but not as much as she loves you. Creative Limerick, Bill. Liked it, hugs me

Bill Baker
Date: 7/26/2025 6:13:00 PM

Smiles, thank you my beautiful, intelligent, wife with the great personality that likes sports a little. It all worked out! Bill

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/26/2025 3:57:00 PM

Figuring people out takes time!

Bill Baker
Date: 7/26/2025 6:11:00 PM

Just a fun write, Kim. You women are all out of my league. :-) Have a pleasant evening, my friend, Bill