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My back’s in the sun with a ring-a-ling-ding Have to admit I am doing my thing I sit outside with couch, but no vase of Ming The dog and cat are here, bringing me bling I hear a cardinal alight with a teensy ping She begins to open her beak to try to sing The cat jumps up and she takes off on one wing You see on this porch Shark my cat is the king A Prime delivery truck stops; I hear a cha-ching. Have no idea what it is; I ask him to fling. He refuses to do it, what a ding-a-ling! I grab it and throw it myself with a zing. He gives me a good day and leaves after I sling. This package of cookies on the couch, tied with string I would continue this poem if I was not out of ing But since I am, I will limp inside on my torn-up hamstring. Written 8-15-2021 Contest: Monorhyme Sponsor: William Kekaula

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Date: 2/17/2022 4:33:00 PM
That's the thing about ing's, they make for such good reading as long as each line finishes with a ing . . . : )
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/17/2022 11:45:00 PM
Thank you Indiana
Date: 8/25/2021 5:57:00 PM
Dear Caren, your charming pen leaves me smiling! Endearing and entertaining, my friend, I especially adore your third stanza; "He refuses to do it, what a ding-a-ling! / I grab it and throw it myself with a zing." so feisty! lol, I love it! Congratulations for your excellent win in William's contest, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/26/2021 6:11:00 AM
Thank you so much Susan; I had an incredible time dancing to this one as it came prancing out of my head.
Date: 8/21/2021 1:44:00 PM
Caren, you complete your fling of ing with this funny thing. Such fun, well done.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/22/2021 7:11:00 AM
Thank you Greg. I love monorhymes; they make me happy!
Date: 8/21/2021 10:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a fun/creative~~story/write. Thanks for the laugh. I needed that. Thanks for all the laughs you bring to others. Have a blessed day/weekend with your win...............
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/22/2021 7:11:00 AM
Thank you very much Paula
Date: 8/20/2021 9:39:00 PM
A stimulating monorhyme -- oceans, and porches, eh! Yikes! Delighted with your closing lines. Blessings, Caren, for sharing your engaging and witty talents, Aloha!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/21/2021 7:05:00 AM
Thank you so much William
Date: 8/16/2021 9:57:00 AM
You have a great positive outlook that is so contagious dear Caren. You made everyday routine into an extraordinary adventure. I love the title of the poem...
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/21/2021 7:06:00 AM
Thank yo JCB I do love to play! Poetry and painting are my play pens!
Date: 8/16/2021 8:55:00 AM
eating cherries bing? Did you not hear the phone ring? Good one, Caren, I loved it!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/16/2021 8:58:00 AM
Thank you Hank. I had fun writing it too.

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