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so unlikely

       your breath on the lens will lessen,

it’s an uneven reminder that,

 

- you’re the only one

 

Out of focus

 

 

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~ Simple Thoughts ~

    I can see clearly

 

* * Some choose to look only through the fog * *

Out of focus



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so unlikely 
       your breath on the lens will lessen, 
it’s an uneven reminder that, 

    - you’re the only one

Out of focus


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~ Simple Thoughts ~ 
     I can see clearly

* *  Some choose to look only through the fog * *
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Zumwalt Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 9:55 AM
Great minimalist work! The very strong metaphor provides the power the poem has to make a strong impact! Very well done!
Nicole Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 4:54 PM
Was trying to make a point using only a few words, and it looks like I succeeded. Thank you. S.H. I appreciate your thoughts. My best to you. ~ Brandy
Crandall Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 11:13 AM
Thought provoking poem, Brandy. I guess sometimes folks look through fog when they don't want to see.
Nicole Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 7:01 PM
Many do exactly that. It's sad and frustrating all at the same time. I appreciate you David, and your lovely comment. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Maverick Avatar
October 23, 2024 at 5:07 AM
A foggy tale of lifes distraction Brandy.' Well done.'
Nicole Avatar
October 25, 2024 at 10:28 AM
Sometimes those distractions cause chaos. It's best to look beyond the fog. Thank you, Joe. You and your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Fowler Avatar
September 17, 2024 at 7:11 AM
Love this Brandy! "You're th only one - out of focus" :)
Nicole Avatar
September 21, 2024 at 4:51 PM
Thank you Linda, for sharing your favorite thought within. So many choose to stay out of focus. Your kind words mean so much. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Delaney Avatar
August 31, 2024 at 10:56 AM
Hello Brandy: In just a few words you point out so cleverly that the gig is up. Loved catching up with you.Hugs, SuZ
Nicole Avatar
August 31, 2024 at 5:42 PM
Dear Suzanne, being able to see the gig is up, seems to be difficult for many. You and your kind words are greatly appreciated. My best to you, my sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
Callus Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 1:19 PM
There is no beating round the bush here, Brandy! Although we try to give a person the benefit of the doubt, the situation is often too clear to do that! Probably such people are too self-centered to realize. ~ Warm regards and hugs my friend. // paul
Nicole Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 7:10 PM
Dear Paul, both statements hold so much truth. I've found those dealing with the ' self centered ' syndrome are on a different playing field. One, I'm not wishing to interact with. You and your thoughts are appreciated. Thank you for being here, for being you. :) Hugs, Brandy
DiMino Avatar
July 18, 2024 at 11:41 AM
Very beautiful, Brandy. God bless.
Nicole Avatar
July 19, 2024 at 7:00 PM
Thank you, Joe. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Mcconnell Avatar
July 17, 2024 at 7:48 PM
Such a beautiful and delicate penned piece Brandy, it's really insightful and makes one wonder and ponder with the thoughts you convey here. Hope all is well with you my dear friend. Blessings and hugs, Gordon
Nicole Avatar
July 19, 2024 at 6:58 PM
Dear Gordon, so kind of you to stop by and read this scribble of mine. You and your thoughts are appreciated. I'm doing well, my sweet friend. Sending many blessings your way. :) Hugs, Brandy
Manassian Avatar
July 12, 2024 at 12:49 AM
Insightful write, Brandy. Some are so self absorbed they dummy realize they're out of focus. Thank you ever so much for your visit to my page. I appreciate the sentiments you shared. Blessings
Nicole Avatar
July 13, 2024 at 7:35 PM
Dear Eileen, you're thoughts hold so much truth. Sad, in many ways. You're very welcome my sweet friend. I appreciate you and your kindness. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Goldsmith Avatar
July 8, 2024 at 2:55 PM
I really enjoyed reading your wonderful write with a great picture. Great Ending... I wish you would write more. Have a blessed day writing away............
Nicole Avatar
July 9, 2024 at 2:52 PM
Thank you Paula, for your beautiful comment. I appreciate you saying that. When the time is right, my poetry will simmer in the soup. Many wonderful blessings to you, my sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
Maverick Avatar
July 6, 2024 at 10:28 AM
How true is our sight? Well you have reall put A poser here Brandy..I shall re-read this and Think a lot, Good to read you today'
Nicole Avatar
July 9, 2024 at 2:25 PM
So kind of you to say, Joe. Seeing clearly is very important, especially when it comes to moments in life. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Dietrich Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 9:33 AM
A short but powerful one, Brandy
Nicole Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 7:09 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I appreciate you and your kind words. My best to you, my sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
Proxenos Avatar
June 30, 2024 at 6:05 AM
'-Thoughts I can see clearly - some choose to look only through fog . We are the only ones who can determine are lives here on earth, and like it or not we do have to live with it, You see clearly that we have choices in life if we stay focused they will be beautiful, sensitive and romantic.Well penned dear . Hugs, Blessings, Jennifer.
Nicole Avatar
June 30, 2024 at 8:40 PM
So true, Jennifer. We are in control of our choices, and with that being said, we're also in control of the lens/or mirrors we fog up. Never create a cloudy view for someone else, unless you're willing to make the path clear when you're done. Your lovely comment is appreciated, my sweet friend. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Pedrus Avatar
June 28, 2024 at 7:12 PM
Breathtaking! A romantic at heart
Nicole Avatar
June 28, 2024 at 7:50 PM
Yes, I'm a romantic. Thank you Patti, you and your kind words are appreciated. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Sands Avatar
June 15, 2024 at 6:57 PM
Very nice Brandy! Truth and sensitivity shine :)
Nicole Avatar
June 15, 2024 at 7:25 PM
That's a beautiful thought, Heidi. You're exactly right. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Gentile Avatar
June 15, 2024 at 5:39 AM
Brandy, I agree with you. So much in life is a choice! We must make it and then enjoy or endure the consequences! Your wonderfully romantic style lends itself to this poetic message and as usual, it's extremely beautiful!! I can see clearly !! Happy Saturday xxoo
Nicole Avatar
June 15, 2024 at 7:22 PM
Mike, and now I agree with you. Life is filled with many choices. While others fog up the lens refusing to leave, my choice is to stay focused. It seems to be working for me, and I am enjoying the view. :) So sweet of you to say that my style is romantic, and my thoughts hold a message within. My heart is smiling. Happy Saturday to you too ! :) Hugs, Brandy
Wraith Avatar
June 14, 2024 at 7:47 AM
In a “simple thought” and simple sentence, resides profound depth. Your statement challenges the reader to take a deeper, introspective look at oneself, to investigate their perspective, values and beliefs; to reframe or adjust their perspective to better “see” through the “fog”. I found this statement tremendously interesting and contemplative. Well done.
Nicole Avatar
June 14, 2024 at 7:51 PM
Edward, you're able to read between the lines and understand the meaning that's hidden within. I truly appreciate you noticing, and even more so, for expressing it so beautifully with your comment. I can tell that you're able to see me and moments clearly, those around you. Thank you, my dear friend. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
May Avatar
June 11, 2024 at 6:54 AM
You framed this one nicely Brandy, hugs
Nicole Avatar
June 11, 2024 at 6:10 PM
Very clever comment, Joseph ! Thank you for sharing your thoughts. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Buhagiar Avatar
June 10, 2024 at 2:18 AM
Enigmatically romantic. Loved it.
Nicole Avatar
June 10, 2024 at 7:10 PM
Staying in a fog is never good. Being mysterious in a romantic way, is a good thing. Thank you Victor, for sharing how you see this. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Hugs, Brandy
One Avatar
June 9, 2024 at 10:06 AM
Some can get misplaced in the mist.. When I see fog, I always turn on my fog lights in my car.. deep few lines in your poem... I hope we all remain focused or go to the opticians.. That normally helps..
Nicole Avatar
June 9, 2024 at 7:35 PM
There's so many ways to ' see,' indeed. A light truly does help, when in a fog. That goes for seeing others. Many seem to enjoy staying out of focus. I will never understand that. Thank you Silent One, for your lovely comment. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Parker Avatar
June 8, 2024 at 11:05 PM
Are those rose colored glasses? ? ? BL poignantly is enigmatic. :o)
Nicole Avatar
June 9, 2024 at 7:18 PM
Many wear them ! Seeing things as they really are, many fail to do. Many choose to stay in a fog, on purpose. Thank you, Arlo. I appreciate you and your thoughts. :)
Empress Avatar
June 8, 2024 at 2:37 AM
So many choose to look only through fog unfortunately, too reluctant to see the colors .. i prefer colors and whats beyond the fog. Beautifully woven and delivered dear brandy. I especially love “ your breath on the lens will lessen, it’s an uneven reminder that, - you’re the only one” brilliant! Pleasure reading your work: sending you light:
Nicole Avatar
June 8, 2024 at 7:32 PM
Dear Ink, you're able to find the positive within, and to someone like me, that's wonderful in so many ways. ( I prefer colors too ) We live in a world where many try to keep the lens foggy. Remember to always stay focused, the best you can, anyway. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. So kind of you to share your favorite lines within. My best to you, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
Hind Avatar
June 7, 2024 at 8:30 PM
Gorgeous writing- sooo beautiful in fact, loved the ending
Nicole Avatar
June 8, 2024 at 7:08 PM
Paige, your kind words humble me. I know you can see clearly as well. Knowing this truth brings a smile to my heart. Thank you. My best to you, my sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
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