Out In the Rain

Out in the rain the restless winds
now moan as winter's pale rescinds.
The flowers at the window bay
are silent bells that stiffly sway
while marching on the roof begins,

a riot of a billion pins
that shatter all my disciplines.
I clasp my hands as if to pray
out in the rain.

I feel the breath of pardoned sins;
on tenterhooks this mid-March grins
its unborn promise.  I'm away
to spread my arms in gleeful splay
and echo tales this cloudburst spins
out in the rain.


3/12/18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ravidas Avatar
August 4, 2019 at 9:54 AM
My best congrats out in the rain) Lovely rondeau.
Cozart Avatar
August 4, 2019 at 10:09 AM
Thanks, Kurt!
Messina Avatar
August 4, 2019 at 8:51 AM
Wonderful poem, Dale. So well written...Congratulations on your win in my contest..and thanks for entering. Regards, Charlie
Cozart Avatar
August 4, 2019 at 9:52 AM
Thanks very much, Charlie.
Allison Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 8:27 AM
Absolutely beautiful rondeau Dale many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Cozart Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 8:32 AM
Thanks very much, Jan!
Devonshire Avatar
February 19, 2019 at 5:01 PM
You describe well the arrival of spring and your desire to greet the March rain storms, Dale. There were some wonderful entries in this category. Congratulations on your second-place win! Best wishes, Carolyn
Cozart Avatar
February 19, 2019 at 5:28 PM
Thank you, Carolyn.
Barden Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 2:28 AM
Wonderful Rondeau, Dale - great work.
Dietrich Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 3:34 PM
oh and a win!!! Congrats!
Dietrich Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 3:34 PM
Oh, DAle, I do believe you are one of the best writers of this form I have seen here. I have been doing this form many years now and I adore it. Bravo. This rocks.
Cozart Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 3:51 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea!
Krampe Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 12:05 PM
Coming back with congrats, Dale!
Cozart Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 12:08 PM
Thanks, Agnes.
Gauthier Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 9:16 AM
Congrats on your win, Dale. Well done.
Cozart Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 10:02 AM
Thanks, Line.
Gentile Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 7:57 AM
The sweet cleanse of rain can be wonderful as you beautifully portray here, Dale!!!
Cozart Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 8:34 AM
Thanks much, Mike.
Turner Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 11:40 PM
March is a stormy month here where I live, However, I happen to be one who loves a good thunderstorm. Nicely penned, Dale.
Cozart Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 8:34 AM
Thanks a lot, Daniel.
Ashley Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 9:43 PM
Beautifully enchanting Dale. Superb sensory imagery - I especially love 'a riot of a billion pins' - sheer genius my friend!
Cozart Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 8:33 AM
Thanks very much, Susan.
Krampe Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 6:16 PM
Love your description of the rain! And love the imagery. I really enjoyed this, Dale (even though I am sick of rain)
Cozart Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 6:30 PM
Thanks, Agnes. Me, too.
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