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Out For the Count

17 syllables in a haiku 33 to an epulaeryu 11 makes a lanterne glow 10 helps a sonnet flow

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/28/2012 9:25:00 PM

Brian,, stopping by to say goodbye and to wish you a happy new year... always~ LINDA

Zach Aurel Henderson

Date: 5/25/2009 5:35:00 PM

this is a great poem... brilliant mind... very creative

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 5/17/2009 1:06:00 PM

This one is very creative. You have been wearing your thinking cap I see. Great job! ~Joseph

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 4/4/2009 4:43:00 PM

Love the ryhme, and the information...nice list. Congratulations on your Honorable Mention in the List contest.

John Heck

Date: 11/23/2008 4:18:00 AM

Dear Brian - Congratulations on your WIN in Kristin's contest! Also, thank you for sponsoring such diverse and thought provoking contests for us Soupers to challenge ourselves with. Your blogs and words of wisdom help the poets here become better artists...I know your intellect and imagination has certainly helped me...and for that I thank you! Wishing you and your family a Happy & Healthy Thanksgiving. Peace always, John

Juliane Thomas

Date: 11/19/2008 12:53:00 PM

I love this list...seems like I'm always counting syllables, which is something I love to do! Congratulations on your win in Kristen's contest!

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/19/2008 12:45:00 PM

I enjoyed this the first time I read it! Congratulations on placing in Kristin's contest! Well deserved! ~ Carrie

Michael Jordan

Date: 11/18/2008 7:47:00 AM

Brian that was genius - While I have you here thank you for the second place - And congratulations on your placing in the contest - God Bless, MJ

Sharon Winter

Date: 11/18/2008 5:07:00 AM

Congratulations dear Brian on your clever poem placing in Kristin's contest! Love, Shar

Michael Torres

Date: 11/2/2008 5:43:00 PM

Very creative and unique Brian another excellent write from you. Blessings Michael

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/2/2008 8:06:00 AM

Kristin's contest was a challenge...however you came out a winner with this one!! I would never have thought of this, even though the subject matter right in front of my eyes! Great job, Brian! ~ Carrie

Sharon Winter

Date: 11/2/2008 6:25:00 AM

Too clever! And would ya look at those commenters too! Unique idea Brian. Well done! Love, Shar

Jim Wilson

Date: 11/2/2008 4:39:00 AM

31 for a tanka's take Another 17 for a crystallines' sake Jim

Sean Kelly

Date: 11/2/2008 4:20:00 AM

And 15 bruisers for a " Limerick "... ( Thomand Park , Capital of Munster ) ... We all can " count " on Sir Brian for the best .....