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Our World/I Wonder (Poem Version)

Seven things that are taking over our world Unprotected Sex, Drugs, Deception, Unhappiness, Greed, Low Self-Esteem, and no love for self Problems that seem consistent to the average man Maybe it's time for a new light With this new ability to see We will all undergo a change of mind A creation of self-empowerment The right to change the seemingly unchageable Bright and everlasting this light will be Filled with love for self and true passion The will to speak and speak out loud Stand up for what's right We have been decieved Ripped and torn away from our goal in life Eternal happiness, Lastiong love, and Personal Satisfaction Feel the rushing rage of honor With this I will not ponder Who's responsibility is it to start a new and imrpoved world for the up-and-coming generation Looking in the mirror I Wonder

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/6/2009 1:12:00 PM
again excellent write---Charma
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Date: 9/6/2009 12:49:00 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Romeo. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/5/2009 5:03:00 PM
All of America needs to question self. Nicely written questions and thoughts. Sara
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Date: 9/5/2009 5:03:00 PM
"We will all undergo a change of mind" love this line...Raul
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