Our Wedding In 1971

Ending in a flouncy ruffle, I married in a brown crushed velvet dress
This was 1971. Only six people were there, maybe one less.
My groom was nervous, I had sweet talked him into eloping with me.
I was confident this was the way God meant our wedding to be.

This was our second try at finding a justice of the peace.
My husband’s pants were ironed into a straight down middle crease.
He had a big hunk of dark hair that fell across his left hazel eye.
I believe I heard a secretary give a little sigh.

These people had tried to talk us out of this quickie wedding.
Strangers to us, they had a deputy give a little sing.
This was during the awful horrible Vietnam War you realize.
My groom was number thirty-eight in the draft, danger could arise.

We have been married fifty years, so things worked out rather well.
My husband never had to serve in swamps of that foreign hell.
He always says that I looked beautiful on our wedding day.
When I look at him, he is nineteen. What could be better anyway?
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Cunningham Avatar
June 10, 2022 at 10:50 AM
Wishing you both many more happy years together Caren. Tom
Krutsinger Avatar
June 10, 2022 at 2:06 PM
Thank you Tom. We were both 19.
Hankins Avatar
June 10, 2022 at 10:18 AM
Ah, I am really touched. Is this the real story, or are you writing a fictional account? Oh, it doesn't matter because I'll think of it as how it was. Such a wonderful story of love.
Krutsinger Avatar
June 10, 2022 at 2:06 PM
This is it
Rodrigues Avatar
June 10, 2022 at 9:55 AM
Love it! We all have a story! We were married in 1980 by a Justice of the Peace. I wore my prom dress (It was white and when I bought it I unknowingly prophesied, “This would make a nice wedding gown.” My husband wore his Navy Uniform with the cap close to his eyes. ~ hugs, Kim
Krutsinger Avatar
June 10, 2022 at 2:07 PM
Ah, yes, we are both elopers then! GREAT Company!
Cheney Avatar
June 10, 2022 at 9:22 AM
An inspiring tale of love. The many great and wonderful ways two people can build a life together.
Krutsinger Avatar
June 10, 2022 at 2:07 PM
Thank you Kenneth
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