Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Quatrain

- Our Two Stars Sparkle As One Soul -

They whisper their sonnets and surrender their thrones gracefully
Consuming tunes sweetly echoing and crowning a heart with love 
Your gentle words, your tender touch, so much divine beauty as
Our two stars sparkle as one soul with one golden smile of eternity

When the sun rises in the east and the sun sets in the west we know
While looking upon a dream holding the deepest vision awestruck
The new sun across the sky passes so the soul can reach its destiny
And you vanquished all doubts of me burning as one flame on fire 

Knowing the winds in Heaven mix forever in a powerful divine glory
With one angel standing before our eyes as destiny sparks its promise
That in God’s way it must be the message of love we feel so strongly
Embracing forever the alchemy of two stars blazing hot with emotion
 
Dreams and fantasies merge with this wonderful bliss ever so gently
As faraway rising is your sunshine holding hands warmly as a regal gift 
And a truth filled with blessing, deeply peaceful and complete as we pray
Under a bridge of hope with colors kissing the heart and soul of a dream

Love and devotion pervade our eternal desire of oneness with the Lord God
As His heavenly guard ushers our souls together with purpose before Him
And as a choir of angels sing their majestic paeans honoring this moment
We see now our dreams melding as one as our two stars sparkle as one soul 






Anne-Lise Andresen, Liam McDaid, and Gary Bateman – A Collaborated
Poem, Copyright © All Rights Reserved – June 11, 2015 (Unrhymed Quatrain)

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Debbie Duncan September 2, 2015 at 11:40 AM This is lovely Anne Lise :) nice collaboration ! Thank you for coming to read my Love Marilyn, she was/ is my fav girl from age 9-10 when I started paying attention to movie stars :) xo Anne-Lise Andresen September 2, 2015 at 11:45 AM - Marylyn's family came from Norway - My Town: Haugesund :) - Thank you for your visit and your comments, dear Debbie - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kevin Fairbrother July 8, 2015 at 5:45 AM Great work you all, enjoyed it and thanks for the read. cheers Kev Anne-Lise Andresen August 2, 2015 at 7:47 AM - Kevin, thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath July 1, 2015 at 10:21 AM Excellent collab my lovely lovely friend. Done very nicely. A 7 i feel. Loved always,bl Anne-Lise Andresen July 1, 2015 at 10:34 AM - Thank you for the beautiful words my friend, Bl - Nice to see you back :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock June 27, 2015 at 4:06 PM Simply awesome. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen June 27, 2015 at 4:58 PM - Dear Phyllis glad that you enjoy our poem: - Two Stars Sparkle as One Soul - Thank you for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) -

Shereeen Esther J June 14, 2015 at 3:17 PM Awesome !!! I like your poem ...superb !! Anne-Lise Andresen June 15, 2015 at 2:10 AM - Shereeen, thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso June 14, 2015 at 1:49 AM Stunning, a menage a trois of poetry! Anne-Lise Andresen June 14, 2015 at 10:39 AM - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Arthur :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 14, 2015 at 12:43 AM Anne Lise, GAry, and Liam: Super poem is this!!! =') beautiful lines and just welling of imagery and yes yes lovely! ~Olive ELoisa Anne-Lise Andresen June 14, 2015 at 10:39 AM - Olive, super thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud June 13, 2015 at 3:19 PM a triumvirate of souls so connected through beautiful poetry.. clap, clap to all of you... have a fun sunday , anne..huggs Anne-Lise Andresen June 14, 2015 at 10:38 AM - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison June 13, 2015 at 8:05 AM Anne Lise Gary and Liam - what can I say - simply amazing - congrats to you all - a 7 from me:-) Hugs jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen June 14, 2015 at 10:38 AM - Jan, thanks for visiting a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Seren Roberts June 13, 2015 at 6:26 AM Lovely Collab. Congratulations to you all...Seren Anne-Lise Andresen June 14, 2015 at 10:37 AM - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Seren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Afolabi Muideen June 12, 2015 at 11:18 AM What a great poem and a great collaboration for you both......A.M. Anne-Lise Andresen June 12, 2015 at 1:35 PM - Afolabi nice that you enjoy our poem, thank you for your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) -

Ken Jordan June 12, 2015 at 10:29 AM Hello my friend??this poem of love is what we all need to read today, and everyday. Thank you for sharing Anne, always Ken Anne-Lise Andresen June 12, 2015 at 1:34 PM - Thanks for the lovely comments and visit, Ken - I'm glad you enjoy it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Hannington Mumo June 12, 2015 at 10:07 AM I salute this fertile collaboration. 7+! Anne-Lise Andresen June 12, 2015 at 1:33 PM - Hannington, many thanks for the lovely comments and a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Milton Robertson June 12, 2015 at 6:51 AM Beautifully written, By The Grace Of GOD. Anne-Lise Andresen June 12, 2015 at 1:32 PM - Thanks for the lovely comments and visit, Milton - I'm glad you enjoy it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ken Carroll June 11, 2015 at 11:17 PM Well crafted collaboration Anne! Anne-Lise Andresen June 12, 2015 at 1:31 PM - Many thanks for the lovely comments, Ken - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter June 11, 2015 at 9:06 PM Hi Anne-Lise Liam n' Gary!Another very beautiful and captivating love poem filled with wonderful hopes and dreams penned by you my dearest friends.Just dazzling!Very beautifully written.Great imagery!Awesome collaboration between the three of you.A very sweet piece to keep very close to my heart.smiling.A 7+++to each.A fav!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A real gem!Enjoyed it.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^ Anne-Lise Andresen June 12, 2015 at 1:30 PM - Nice that you enjoy our poem Dorian, thank you for your visit and a 7 :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton June 11, 2015 at 8:04 PM very lovely Anne Lise hugs 7 Anne-Lise Andresen June 12, 2015 at 1:29 PM - Thanks for the lovely comments and a 7 - I'm glad you enjoy it, Shadow :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid June 11, 2015 at 4:37 PM sure was a beautiful three way tango anne lise and gary just blew me away smiling your pens sang out a golden tune loved doing this piece with you both passing you both a smile wishing you all a blessed weekend Anne-Lise Andresen June 12, 2015 at 1:27 PM - I smile every time I read it :) - thank my friend Liam - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak June 11, 2015 at 1:53 PM Wow! I am impressed! Put the pens of three incredibly talented poets together and you have created a poetic symphony! Anne-Lise Andresen June 11, 2015 at 2:02 PM - I am very proud of this poem myself :) - (I have two talented men "behind me") - Thanks for the lovely comments and I'm glad you enjoy it dear Monterey :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman June 11, 2015 at 12:57 PM What can I say Dear Anne-Lise!! This co-write is simply marvelous and emotes a powerful and ethereal message of love, dreams, hope, and divine providence. I'm, of course, slightly biased (HA HA), and I really liked the three-way co-authorship among you, Liam, and me on this wonderful effort. I believe the end result turned out extraordinarily well and fully expressed our mutual intent!! Best Always, Gary Anne-Lise Andresen June 11, 2015 at 1:09 PM - A first class poem if I may say so myself :) - I never thought I'd say this, but I am becoming more and more fond of co- writing - Remember the first time Liam asked me about a co- writing ..... I was terrified !!! :))) - Thanks for the great cooperation dear friend Gary! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick June 11, 2015 at 12:34 PM Another good collaboration from you..If for a contest, reads like a winner..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara Anne-Lise Andresen June 11, 2015 at 12:37 PM - It is not for contest, Sara - Nice that you enjoy our poems, thank you for your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France June 11, 2015 at 11:20 AM Anne-Lise, how beautifully you all wrote as one, amazing poem and thanks for visiting my God poem Anne-Lise Andresen June 11, 2015 at 1:36 PM - A pleasure and joy to write with two skilled friends :) - Many thanks for the lovely comments and one 7 B.W. - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Constance La France June 11, 2015 at 11:22 AM Almost forgot 7

Eve Roper June 11, 2015 at 11:03 AM Wonderful write a 7, "kissing the heart and soul of a dream " hugs eve Anne-Lise Andresen June 11, 2015 at 1:38 PM - Many thanks for the lovely comments and one 7, Eve - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian June 11, 2015 at 8:50 AM Absolutely fabulous!!! Three hearts beating as one!!! I loved this...I really did! Hugs to all of you!!!! I'm going to fav it. Not often you read a collab of THREE poets!!! Anne-Lise Andresen June 11, 2015 at 10:47 AM - Three is better than two .... and two is better than one :))) - Thanks for the nice visit, and especially thank you for a "fav." dear Eileen! - hugs // Anne-Lise with friends :)