Our Town

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8/22/2024 for Monoku Marc Chagall Poetry Contest sponsored by Di11y Da11y

Over Town by Marc Chagall

joy, exhilaration, all that is dear, before my eyes, in my arms

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thriveni c mysore

Date: 8/28/2024 7:45:00 AM

a beautiful one-liner. the sponsor says some did not place because of wrong title. the name of the painting is 'over the town'. anyways, happy write.

David Crandall
Date: 8/28/2024 7:49:00 AM

Thanks for letting me know, Thriveni, haha, I'd like to think that's why it didn't place - lol

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/22/2024 10:34:00 AM

The painting inspired you well David, good luck in the contest. Tom