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Our Time Together hand in hand we stroll window shopping our wishes together on the couch trading laughs as we guess the Jeopardy questions making small talk over a dinner we prepared together hiking along our favorite trail taking in the beauty of nature art galleries are your favorite and you fish with me a gentle smile at the end of a long day or a knowing glance at night in bed, we caress each other and talk of our time together we run our fingers through each other’s hair and we touch

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Date: 6/2/2025 5:10:00 AM
Beautiful moments shared!
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Date: 6/1/2025 7:26:00 AM
You've expressed beautifully the sweet and romantic moments in a relationship through your well-crafted poem my dear poet friend, Oliver. Hope this moment will last. My great pleasure reading your verycreative work tonight. Thanks a lot. Hugs. God bless you always and your poetry.
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 6/1/2025 9:37:00 AM
Thanks Len, I appreciate your comments
Date: 6/1/2025 5:50:00 AM
What a beautiful little poem of a loving, functional relationship Ollie. Love it
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 6/1/2025 9:38:00 AM
Thanks Tom. Glad you like it.

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