Our Time Together

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Our Time Together

hand in hand we stroll
window shopping our wishes
together on the couch trading laughs
as we guess the Jeopardy questions
making small talk over a dinner
we prepared together
hiking along our favorite trail
taking in the beauty of nature
art galleries are your favorite
and you fish with me
a gentle smile at the end of
a long day or a knowing glance
at night in bed, we caress each other
and talk of our time together
we run our fingers through
each other’s hair and we touch

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/2/2025 5:10:00 AM

Beautiful moments shared!

Len Gasun

Date: 6/1/2025 7:26:00 AM

You've expressed beautifully the sweet and romantic moments in a relationship through your well-crafted poem my dear poet friend, Oliver. Hope this moment will last. My great pleasure reading your verycreative work tonight. Thanks a lot. Hugs. God bless you always and your poetry.

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 6/1/2025 9:37:00 AM

Thanks Len, I appreciate your comments

Tom Woody

Date: 6/1/2025 5:50:00 AM

What a beautiful little poem of a loving, functional relationship Ollie. Love it

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 6/1/2025 9:38:00 AM

Thanks Tom. Glad you like it.