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Entered In The Premiere Contest, "Free For All"
Sponsor, Fire Bird
June 6, 2024

Our Sunshine High



Bright sunshine magnifies our happiness
    with rays that spread a glow on all we see.
          It has a way of dulling dreariness
               and blocking thoughts of glum reality.

Our minds are soothed with the euphoria
     instilled from sun-splashed skies and golden views
          that numb all negative dysphoria
               as highs from sunny rays to minds infuse.

A precious gift, this sunshine we enjoy:
     its mighty power helps all nature grow;
          but added too, a psychedelic ploy
               to keep us balanced through our ebb and flow.

To help reduce our swings to dolefulness-
                Bright sunshine magnifies our happiness.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Leiser Avatar
June 9, 2019 at 4:23 PM
What a lovely and enchanting Sonnet you have skillfully penned, Sandra! I was truly enjoyed it! Congrats on your win! :)
Haight Avatar
June 11, 2019 at 4:24 PM
Thank you so much, Laura, for your visit, lovely comments, and congrats! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 9, 2019 at 1:00 PM
Dale's contest really inspired some beautiful poetry as this one Sandra. I can only imagine how difficult it was for him to choose only 10 winners. Congratulations on making it on the shortlist with this deserving entry. Beautiful! : ) xxoo
Haight Avatar
June 11, 2019 at 4:23 PM
Thank you again, Connie! Hugs, Sandra
Gondolf Avatar
June 9, 2019 at 11:49 AM
Congrats on your win, Sandra, I enjoyed your sunny sonnet. John
Haight Avatar
June 11, 2019 at 4:23 PM
Thanks so much, John, for your visit, uplifting comment, and congrats! Much appreciated. Sandra :)
Gauthier Avatar
June 9, 2019 at 11:35 AM
Back with well deserved congrats, Sandra.
Haight Avatar
June 11, 2019 at 4:22 PM
Thank you, Line! Hugs, Sandra
Cozart Avatar
June 9, 2019 at 11:27 AM
Congratulations on your 9th Place win! This was a VERY tough contest to judge. Thank you so much for taking the time to enter.
Haight Avatar
June 11, 2019 at 4:21 PM
Thank you, Dale, for the great contest and my nice placement. Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 10:08 PM
Beautiful rhythm, Sandra. Well done and congrats.
Haight Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 7:10 PM
Thank you once again, Line, for your visits and encouraging comments. Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 4:38 AM
Congratulations, Sandra on your win. A beautiful sonnet.
Haight Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 8:39 AM
Thank you, Subimal! Hugs, Sandra
Gondolf Avatar
March 21, 2018 at 11:26 AM
Sandra, congrats on your win. I really like your final couplet, especially the last line which is so very true for me. John
Haight Avatar
March 21, 2018 at 6:46 PM
Thank you so much, John, for your visit, congrats and uplifting comment. Sandra :)
Hamilton Avatar
March 21, 2018 at 11:09 AM
Lovely write Sandra, especially loved the last couplet, congrats on a fine win!
Haight Avatar
March 21, 2018 at 6:45 PM
Thank you very much, John. Sonnets are my favorite form and I enjoyed participating. Sandra
Leiser Avatar
March 8, 2018 at 11:14 AM
Lovely write, Sandra! Your eloquent words describing how the sun lightens our mood are superb! Good luck in the contest :)
Haight Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 1:45 PM
Thank you very much, Laura, for your very uplifting and supportive comments! Hugs, Sandra
Wanter Avatar
March 7, 2018 at 10:55 AM
Just love this - a fav.
Haight Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 1:44 PM
Thank you so much, Sunlite! I appreciate your visit, nice comment, and the fav! Hugs, Sandra
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