Our Song

those few notes propel me through a nostalgic spiral to way back when Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~SUNLIT RIPPLES~ 2019 Also published in my mini photo/anthology ~CLOUDS MEANDER~ 2020 AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted for contest MONOKU 2: NEW YEAR sponsored by SILENT ONE - December 27, 2017 - RANKED 2ND

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Susan Ashley

Date: 12/29/2017 9:11:00 PM

A beautiful monoku Line. Fantastic expression, intriguing message. Congratulations on your fine win with your amazing poem.. ~Susan

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/30/2017 12:29:00 AM

Thank you, Susan. Much appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/29/2017 4:42:00 PM

Congrats for your win, LIne. I love your message.

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/30/2017 12:30:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea. Very appreciated.

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/29/2017 3:25:00 PM

Such a well-written Monoku for the New Year, Line! Congratulations on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/29/2017 6:51:00 PM

Thank you, Sandra. Very appreciated. Best wishes.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/29/2017 1:04:00 PM

- Congratulations, Line :) - A great line for the new year - Happy New Year To You - Hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/29/2017 6:52:00 PM

Thank you, Sunshine! I just love your nickname. Best wishes. for 2018.

Silent One

Date: 12/29/2017 6:57:00 AM

Great one liner, Congratulations on your placement in the new year contest and happy new year Line..

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/29/2017 6:53:00 PM

Thank you so much. Very best wishes to you and yours.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 12/27/2017 8:23:00 PM

Oh, that happens, boy does it happen and you summed it up so beautifully. I know you don't literally mean music, but I do! It works, of course, for the New Year, too, but I can't help loving it for the feel songs can give me. Worthy of a pause, this monoku! All the best ... CayCay

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/28/2017 2:52:00 PM

Thanks, CayCay. So happy this short little poem reached out to you. Best wishes.