Paula Swanson Poet Senryu

Our Song

Two halves of a whole
                  blend in perfect harmony
                                          Concert of the heart
                           ~~
                                 
The touch of your soul
                   fate plucked at my heart strings
                                             Life's music of love







For the contest "Special Sentimental Senyru"
Sponsored by Linda Marie
Placement: 5th

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Constance La France March 10, 2011 at 7:03 AM soup mail~~

Carol Sunshine Brown February 24, 2011 at 10:46 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Special Sentimental Senryu". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them Paula. Love, Carol

Dr Hitendra Mehta February 18, 2011 at 12:07 AM Many Congrats Paula for big win in Linda's contest thru' this creative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Elaine George February 17, 2011 at 11:44 PM Beautiful Senryu, dear Paula. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie

Robert A. Dufresne February 17, 2011 at 4:46 PM a beauty Paula. Poetic. Congrats to you

Andrea Dietrich February 17, 2011 at 2:02 PM Musical, sentimental, and I like it! Congratulations, Paula!

Kash Poet February 17, 2011 at 11:25 AM Wonderful Senryu here!Congrats Paula on your well deserved win in this contest--kashinath

Sharon Ruebel February 17, 2011 at 9:48 AM Hello Paula, A most beautiful melody you have played here with your words Congratulations your win Lov, Shar

Audrey Haick February 17, 2011 at 9:37 AM Congratulations on your very fine 5th Place win in the contest, Paula. Beautiful and heart touching. Love, Annalise

John Freeman February 16, 2011 at 7:12 PM Congratulations Paula on your 5th place with your worthy poem, Great job. Agape, Moses

Robert Pettit February 16, 2011 at 6:40 PM Just like Batman and Robin, this is a dynamic duo. Two very well written senryu entries. Congratulations on winning in Linda's contest with them.

Dr.Ram Mehta February 16, 2011 at 5:55 PM Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest of Linda, Paula

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 16, 2011 at 5:34 PM Congrats Paula on your success in my contest.. thankxx for your constant support always ...

Audrey Haick February 3, 2011 at 4:41 PM Fantastic Sentimental Senryu, Paula. It should do very well in Linda's contest. Love, Annalise

Andrea Dietrich February 3, 2011 at 1:43 PM Yours is awesome, Paula. I hope it scores high and I'm giving it highest rating. LUv, andrea

Sara Kendrick February 3, 2011 at 11:33 AM Reads like winning material to me..Enjoyed..Good luck..Sara

Robert Pettit February 2, 2011 at 7:53 PM Two very viable senryu for Linda Marie's contest. Well written and very descriptive.

Skat A February 2, 2011 at 7:44 PM A nice senryu Paula, good luck in the contest.. Luv*Skat

James Marshall Goff February 2, 2011 at 7:22 PM Perfection! Paula! jimbo