Our Secret, Florida Garden

We ventured on a secret walk 
down pebbled paths of leafy palms,
and at the end a lonely dock   
called to us, creaking through the calm.

A warm spring day seduced us, so 
we ventured on a secret walk
to marvel where the orchids grow
between green fern, oak moss and rock.

We silently admired the flocks
of herons, egrets, and cranes as
we ventured on a secret walk
near ripples of blue-gold topaz.

God’s garden swayed in balmy breeze, 
with pentas, sage and hollyhock.
Where brilliant Monarchs flit through trees,   
we ventured on a secret walk.


Written 6/10/20 for Dear Heart's
Garden Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 6/18/2020 5:21:00 PM
Rhonda, congratulations on your win in my garden contest with this beautifully penned poem _Constance
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/18/2020 5:34:00 PM
Thank you so much, Constance! I really enjoyed this one. All of the entries were beautiful. Love and Blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/13/2020 7:03:00 PM
a gorgeous walk in that park of yours, Rhonda. Congrats on your win
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/14/2020 11:00:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea! Rhonda xx
Date: 6/13/2020 6:46:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win Rhonda :) Much love
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/14/2020 11:00:00 PM
Thanks again :) Rhonda
Date: 6/12/2020 1:20:00 AM
Your repetition of the same line in each stanza is very skillfully timed, and the imagery is really good. Great poem.
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/14/2020 11:00:00 PM
Thank you, Lawrence! Rhonda xx
Date: 6/11/2020 11:29:00 PM
You have described this scene in gorgeous imagery; it reads like a song. A psalm almost.
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/14/2020 10:59:00 PM
Very sweet of you...thanks, Caren! Rhonda xx
Date: 6/11/2020 9:13:00 AM
Beautiful memories of a heavenly garden with your amazing imagery and emotions Rhonda! With this contest I have read so many gorgeous poems on garden, that I miss walking in one badly now. God bless you. Much love :)
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/14/2020 10:59:00 PM
Thank you, Aditi! I agree with you. This contest inspired some beautiful poetry including your creative winner. Blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/11/2020 6:29:00 AM
A beautiful secret walk--enjoyed the flow and tone of your poem, Rhonda.
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/14/2020 10:56:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay! Rhonda xx
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