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Our Secret

~~~Amore my pure clandestine soul mate~~~ Placed~ Honorable Mention " First Love " A Linda-Marie Bariana Contest

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/1/2010 6:11:00 AM

Like this indeed..Charma

Lynette Chachere

Date: 4/25/2010 7:46:00 PM

that sounds so sweet only a secret bond between you and your beloved soul mate, a symbol that only belongs to you both.a secret romance. lovely. i see why it is you won, congrats. -Always&Forever Lynette

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/24/2010 5:05:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "First Love" Rick. May you have many more contest wins. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/24/2010 8:01:00 AM

Congratulations on your HM in the contest, Rick! Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/23/2010 9:20:00 PM

very nice, Rick, congrats on your HM. Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/23/2010 5:30:00 PM

Congrats Rick on your HM in my "First Love" contest with this lovely Epigram..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/23/2010 9:35:00 AM

Wishing you the best in Linda-Marie's contest Rick. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/22/2010 11:39:00 PM

Good luck in the contest.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/22/2010 7:29:00 PM

Ah, so your first love had to be hidden. Perhaps this soul mate is still in your life. You leave the reader guessing. Great entry for the contest! Love, Carolyn

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/22/2010 7:09:00 PM

Nicely penned---Thanks for your kind comments today. And on my first love no it was over many years ago. I found out the truth too late after we broke up he was a cheat etc. He moved me on to my prize fella. He got married 3 months after we broke up and is still married. I often wonder if he treats his wife badly. probably so--most people don't change.

Amy Green

Date: 4/22/2010 7:00:00 PM

Oooh- I really like this one.