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Our Perfect Autumn Drive

When fall had settled in like a mellow multi-colored cat, purring with contentment in the beauty of its prime, Fall crept past the summer of its youth and sprawled before us. It stretched out in splendid coolness. Yes, fall was a cat of many colors - an orange burnt almost red among patches of sunshine yellow and spicy ginger. Everywhere we looked we saw those brilliant hues. We had decided to drive up to the mountains where October’s trees had begun to flaunt their brilliant new colors. We passed several orchards on the outskirts of the town, seeing apples and pumpkins sold at road stands as our drive progressed to Canyon Road. Suddenly we were struck with wonder by a beauty even more than that of a multi-colored cat. On both sides of us, the colors cat-sprawled across the faces of mountains, and when the wind blew, the trees moved like the waves of a giant ocean. The multi-colored cat had changed into a sea - a sea of marvelously clad colorful trees that rhythmically moved and glistened as if they were indeed an ocean’s waves, color-tossed beneath the midday sun. We spoke few words, for our eyes were filled with fall’s enchantment. When we reached the man-made lake where blue water glistened as vibrantly as had the leaves of the mountain’s trees, we turned around and headed back home, savoring the ending of our perfect autumn drive. Sept.10, 2022 For the Fall Flavors Poetry contest of Regina McIntosh

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Date: 9/15/2022 4:41:00 AM
Andrea this is so lovely you have captured the beauty of a visual drive touching our senses of Autumn. Well done my Dear...
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Date: 9/15/2022 2:33:00 AM
Morning , Andrea, A wonderful Autumn poem. You have captured the visual feast that Fall is. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 9/12/2022 8:15:00 AM
I adore the way you've worked the cat of many colors into your work here Andrea. It's just beautiful! Linda
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Date: 9/11/2022 10:39:00 AM
Beautiful colors of Fall. No chance of seeing them in Malta.
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Date: 9/11/2022 10:02:00 AM
all great poetry drives our neuropathways into moments we share with the poet....one voice generates a thousand echoes...you poem captures so beautifully the experience, its majestic magic that is Autumn...and for me the memory of driving mom thru her first Autumn in Minnesota...she lived her life in a desert...yes you captured the magic she experienced, a big thank you
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Date: 9/11/2022 10:54:00 AM
wow, it must have been something for her to see Minnesota in fall after only seeing desert all her life!! thanks, Timothy
Date: 9/11/2022 7:30:00 AM
The imagery was relaxing. I felt calm and at peace watching the waves like trees swaying in the breeze. Thank for the comforting poem. Andrea. It made my day a little more peaceful. Smiles and Blessings my friend. Bill
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Date: 9/11/2022 5:52:00 AM
Ahh!! It soon will be here. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your autumn drive with us and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 9/10/2022 11:18:00 PM
Well it's an image rich evocation, an exceptionall Write from your great talent... I'm not sure if you Have plagiarised Tibbles though.? LOL.))) I Shall warn you she has the sharpest claws.' I Suggest a placatory write, on tortoishell cats And her in particular to aussage any lingering Doubts she might harbour, a good idea is to find The 'most woke' person you know to gain real Insight as how's best to proceed. That's if they Make their mind up before November )
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Date: 9/10/2022 7:34:00 PM
Your use of imagery is magical. Beautiful poem.
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Date: 9/10/2022 7:28:00 PM
Beautiful imagery! I do love fall colors on the trees. Makes me want to take a trip to the mountains. We always go in November though. I enjoyed reading this poem. It brought beautiful memories back to me. :)
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