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Our Own Place

You kissed me in the morning sunlight Midst the flowers, awakened by daylight My heart fluttered like wings of butterflies Through the air, under the baby blue skies Uplifted by spring birds, singing all around Fallen from a dream where you were found Nothing seemed to matter, only now this dawn Where dew drops glistened across the lawn You took me by the hand as we disappeared Along a hidden path, with nothing to be feared Love had now taken us away to our own place And I still see flowers blooming, when I look at your face Heidi Sands 4/9/19

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Date: 5/1/2019 1:58:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem of honest love - flowers and love have been partners since the beginning of romance. Loved this poem Heidi. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/1/2019 4:46:00 PM
Oh, thank you! I am happy to see your comments and appreciate your support :)
Date: 4/14/2019 12:49:00 PM
This is just gorgeous, Heidi. Such a nice blending of Nature with Love. (Should have POTD, methinks). A FAVE for me. Best wishes, Gershon
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/14/2019 1:00:00 PM
Thank you so much Gershon. I am happy you like it and consider it a Fave! I appreciate your comments and support. Have a nice day :)
Date: 4/13/2019 2:38:00 PM
Lovely! Love and nature. They do go hand in hand.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/13/2019 2:50:00 PM
Thank you Sandy. I appreciate your comments :)
Date: 4/12/2019 4:04:00 PM
Inspiring love in the grace of nature Heidi. Just beautiful! Have a lovely Easter! : ) xxoo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/12/2019 7:28:00 PM
Thank you Connie. I appreciate your kind comment. Happy Easter to you too :)
Date: 4/11/2019 4:41:00 PM
ohh, affection in full bloom, heidi....very nice!..huggs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/11/2019 5:06:00 PM
Thanks so much Nette :)
Date: 4/11/2019 1:00:00 PM
Hi Heidi: You combined Nature and Love very well!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/11/2019 5:05:00 PM
Thank you Ralph :)
Date: 4/11/2019 9:18:00 AM
Beautiful write Heidi...enjoyed
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/11/2019 5:05:00 PM
Thank you very much :)
Date: 4/10/2019 8:11:00 AM
Love time...live time...life time...Nice write
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/10/2019 9:42:00 AM
Thank you Arturo. Have a nice day :)
Date: 4/9/2019 10:15:00 PM
A beautifully penned poem
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/10/2019 9:42:00 AM
Thank you Allen. I appreciate your comment :)
Date: 4/9/2019 8:56:00 PM
Gee~ what a lovely piece.. I felt it was me! Good work! Panagiota
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/10/2019 9:41:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comment :)

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