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Our Own Immortal Choice

One does not need light to see, nor can dark hide the vision… all cloaks our translucent-- spirit seeping in and out, the soul a bleach of thought and deed; making clear or dissolving the material and immaterial-- tears or joy one’s own immortal choice…. Oblivion was never an option

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Date: 8/23/2018 7:29:00 AM
I've known many people who think they'll end up in oblivion; I love the way you have the soul "seeping" in this one. A wonderful read.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 9/7/2018 7:07:00 AM
Hi M.L.. Strange how to some of us, the soul is more real than the physical. Or at least equal:) Blessings my friend!!
Date: 8/23/2018 3:36:00 AM
The terse words of your poems are of length inversely proportional to the wisdom therein. Well thought and written, Joe.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 9/7/2018 7:08:00 AM
Hi Geoffrey; thank you my friend!

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