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Our Name Still Together

divorce letter--- our names still together on the bark of a tree ;) not my story :)

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Ashesh Das

Date: 5/1/2012 1:40:00 PM

Lovely juxtaposition. I am a fan of your haiku.

Terry L. Allen

Date: 4/29/2012 3:25:00 AM

So glad you put not my story. Very poignant piece. Great write. Huggs TLee

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/23/2012 2:41:00 PM

This WAS MY STORY!!! You do engraving too?..haha You have such a knack at these modern haiku...I do hope that one day you will write a book and do an entire chapter on your wonderful haiku....I can just see it now....don't forget the footnote for this chapter..."I dedicate this chapter to my nutty American friend, Gwendolen." She harassed me until I finally wrote this book! :) " ha ha.

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/23/2012 1:36:00 PM

enjoyed reading this one again Kash ;)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/22/2012 10:35:00 PM

oops I spelled it wrong , it's wilberforce. Strange name to remember. How had you heard of that man? I saw the movie about him many years ago. He was an awesome man in British history.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/22/2012 10:33:00 PM

Wilburforce is for Brian's contest. It's hit and miss with him. I never know what of my stuff he will like. I am curious to see if he is fond of Wilburforce!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/22/2012 10:21:00 PM

This is very nice, Kash. Maybe you could say names, in the plural.I am thinking when two people engrave something on a tree like Tony loves Mary. So it's two names. Sweet one!!