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our moments
 

          - are like
 a symphony, 
   
the    fluttering   of   wings  -


      as daylight  sings 
and clouds    c u r l    a breezy afternoon.  
                                        
                               - waves of delight 
    shared under the same   m o o n.

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      time  is you,
 ( melting into me )  
                     between calendar years


                       -----------------------
             
     our moments   shine
              through poetic whispers, 
       connecting   us  in every way.

                      it is

in the depth of     this ever after,
      where our  love    blooms


                      ~~~~ 

*  always and forever with you, sounds so sweet to me  *

our moments

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our moments

          - are like
 a symphony, 
   
the    fluttering   of   wings  -


      as daylight  sings 
and clouds    c u r l    a breezy afternoon.  
                                        
                               - waves of delight 
    shared under the same   m o o n.

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      time  is you,
 ( melting into me )  
                     between calendar years


                       -----------------------
             
     our moments  shine
              through poetic whispers, 
       connecting   us  in every way.

                      it is

in the depth of     this ever after,
      where our  love    blooms
                   
      
                    ~~~~ 

* always and forever with you, sounds so sweet to me *

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Valsa George May 4, 2026 at 5:32 AM A poem of love that mesmerizes and enchants like summer breeze, delicately touching hearts and lifting one to an ethereal realm. Your format is so appealing. With few lines you unfold a series of powerful emotions. Love your style, dear Brandy. Brandy Nicole May 6, 2026 at 7:41 PM Dearest Valsa, the moments within are a soft touch on my skin, like the wind on a beautiful spring day. A feeling of peace wrapped with gentle love, one that surrounds the heart in such a delicate way. Your thoughts bring a smile and they mean so much. I appreciate the compliment about my signature style. Many wonderful blessings to you, my sweet friend. : ) Hugs, Brandy

Silent One April 14, 2026 at 1:49 PM You ooze romance and sensuality...there is always a serenity in your words... in only a few words you say so much....Beautiful poetry as always... Brandy Nicole April 17, 2026 at 7:34 PM Dear Silent One, romance and sensuality certainly echo within, a reflection of my personality. So kind of you to say that a calm touch surrounds my words. I appreciate you and your thoughts. : ) Hugs, Brandy

Frank Sheehan March 14, 2026 at 9:24 PM Fantastic piece. Wonderful love poem. It captures the essence. Nice rhythm and flow. Enjoyed immensely. Brandy Nicole March 19, 2026 at 5:36 PM Like a beautiful melody, the words within hold me ever so gently. Thank you Frank, for this lovely comment and the compliment. Many wonderful blessings to you. : ) Brandy

CayCay Godwin March 11, 2026 at 11:18 AM YES, I got me a Brandy fix with high grade potency. With you, it's occurred to me that I arrive knowing what I'll get but have no clue how you'll serve it, but passion fuels and romance rules EVERY time without repeating. You rock. Brandy Nicole March 11, 2026 at 7:07 PM I'm smiling BIG with all your thoughts, CayCay. You place me higher than I deserve. I'm just me, a woman writing simple thoughts from the heart, and each one overflows with soooo much love. Thank you my sweet friend, for such a lovely comment, and for all the compliments. Now I'm smiling and floating. : ) Hugs and blessings, Brandy

Heidi Sands March 10, 2026 at 2:22 PM Brandy this is beautiful and peaceful. I love it :) Brandy Nicole March 11, 2026 at 5:50 PM : ) Your thoughts bring a smile, Heidi. Peaceful is a delightful feeling, indeed. Many wonderful blessings to you. : ) Hugs, Brandy

Rob Carmack March 8, 2026 at 7:20 AM This is nicely done Brandy. Brandy Nicole March 8, 2026 at 7:35 PM Thank you so much, Rob. I appreciate you and your kind words. : ) Hugs, Brandy

Anne Winter March 6, 2026 at 11:12 PM Dearest Brandy, your poem felt like a nostalgic and cloudy summer afternoon in the countryside! How beautifully written this poem is! My heart felt happy after reading this! My favorite line is this time is you, ( melting into me ) Best, Anne Brandy Nicole March 8, 2026 at 7:31 PM Dearest Anne, the softness of your words and tender sweetness brings a smile and my heart touches the sky. : ) Your kindness sparkles my dear friend. Knowing your heart is happy lifts me even higher. Thank you for this lovely comment, and for placing this in your favorites. I appreciate you sharing your favorite line as well. : ) Many wonderful blessings to you. : ) Hugs, Brandy

Michael Ramel The Primordial Poet February 27, 2026 at 9:54 PM W.O.W. (wonderfully orchestrated words) :) Brandy Nicole February 28, 2026 at 4:03 PM Thank you, Michael. Such a sweet thing to say. : ) Brandy

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh February 25, 2026 at 8:22 PM Yes, those beautiful romantic moments, though they passed quickly, lingers in memory forever.Beautiful.I like it. Brandy Nicole February 27, 2026 at 7:02 PM They linger for day, for a night and for always. Holding me close. Thank you, Akham for your lovely comment. My best to you. : ) Brandy

Arlo Parker February 24, 2026 at 10:29 AM Sizzling molten passion for the one who completes. Fine offering indeed. Thx, BL. Brandy Nicole February 25, 2026 at 7:18 PM Passion lingers in loving moments. It's soft, sweet and simply breathtaking. Thank you, Arlo. I'm smiling. : ) Brandy

Ink Empress February 23, 2026 at 10:16 AM Awwn this is so romantic, sweet and gentle, i love the flow of your words woven here and the way youv expressed throughout sighs of love beyond time and distance. I really love the lines "time is you, ( melting into me ) between calendar years" how creative and beautiful is that! Stunning really! And soul stirring! Absolute pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always Brandy Nicole February 25, 2026 at 7:12 PM Dearest Ink, the softness within comes from a real place I'm embracing. These moments are beautiful in every way. You bring a smile saying that my thoughts are stunning, creative and soul stirring. : ) Coming from you, that's a compliment. Seems many love this thought that you've highlighted. Between calendar years, hearts touch and linger in love. Thank you so much, my dear sweet friend, for all your kind words. Sending love and light your way, hugs and blessings too. : ) Brandy

Gershon Wolf February 18, 2026 at 8:45 PM 'waves of delight shared under the same moon' -- such a memorable line, Brandy, methinks. Both for the image and the way it rolls into the reader's ears and heart. Bravo! Magical Lands of Enchantment, Gershon Brandy Nicole February 20, 2026 at 7:17 PM While this line is memorable, it is just one of many that caress gently around my heart. This echos truth throughout. A sweet and poetic comment. Thank you so much, Gershon. It's magical, indeed. : ) Hugs. Brandy

Sara Kendrick February 18, 2026 at 4:45 AM I like this romantic and passionate work. Your unique work always adds a special flavor to soup. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Sara K Brandy Nicole February 20, 2026 at 7:04 PM Dearest Sara, I appreciate the lovely compliment about my unique style and the delightful flavor of my words. Your kind thoughts bring a smile. : ) Many wonderful blessings to you, my dear friend. : ) Hugs, Brandy

Joseph May February 15, 2026 at 7:31 PM Love blooms in moonlight's glow. Lovely write Brandy, hugs Brandy Nicole February 16, 2026 at 5:29 PM Love lingers in the moonlight, in day light and in those moments between. : ) So wonderful. Thank you, Joseph. Hugs to you as well. : ) Brandy

I Am Anaya February 15, 2026 at 7:02 AM It just occurred to me, you, Brandy are the Valentine of poetry soup, touching us sweetly with your sweet thoughts. Hope yours was a romantic Valentine's day! xo Brandy Nicole February 20, 2026 at 6:54 PM Thank you, Anaya. : ) I Am Anaya February 18, 2026 at 5:20 PM :) sweet Brandy, stay warm~ Brandy Nicole February 16, 2026 at 5:22 PM Dearest Anaya, I'm truly moved by this compliment, so much so that my eyes are a little misty; in a good way. Thank you for saying this about me. I'm always drifting in the clouds and in love. Valentine's Day was beautiful. My best to you, my sweet friend. Always. : ) Hugs, Brandy

James Peranteau February 13, 2026 at 7:27 PM there'z only one way to say this; Yahweh Created two beautiful flowerz...and their right there in that photo post uv yourn....thank u for bright'nin mine night dear poet...hope yuh look up what 'nin' meanz, *hint; 'tiz sumerian... ,) much love James Peranteau February 15, 2026 at 5:15 AM ') Brandy Nicole February 14, 2026 at 7:01 PM That thought is beautiful and spiritual, James. Our Creator created the flowers, and of course woman. I understand what you mean with what you wanted me to look up. : ) Thank you so much. I appreciate you and your kind words. : ) Hugs, Brandy

Ghairo Daniels February 13, 2026 at 4:01 PM Your writing is both wispy & solid, Brandy. I find it refreshing. Loved this line : “time is you, ( melting into me ) between calendar years”. ThkU for your steady beauty on this site. Happy Valentines Day to you. Brandy Nicole February 13, 2026 at 7:12 PM Ghairo, this compliment is light and carefree, you saying my writing is wispy. : ) Grounded with truth. Always ! I appreciate you saying you find them refreshing. : ) This line is a favorite, it seems. As years linger, moments such as these hold more meaning, they are priceless. Thank you, my dear friend. Happy Valentine's Day to you as well. : ) Brandy

John Gondolf February 13, 2026 at 2:56 AM Your thoughts are so beautiful and romantic my dear friend, they leave me spellbound. Hugs, John Brandy Nicole February 13, 2026 at 5:22 PM Thank you, John. So sweet of you to say I've left you spellbound. : ) Being ' captivated ' is a wonderful feeling, indeed. You and your thoughts are greatly appreciated. : ) Hugs, Brandy

Alexander Gwyn February 11, 2026 at 12:54 PM "time is you, ( melting into me ) between calendar years" WOW! this line should melt everyone Well done Brandy Brandy Nicole February 12, 2026 at 7:02 PM You make me blush and my heart is fluttering with this thought. : ) Thank you, Bruce.

Daisy Meadows February 11, 2026 at 12:45 AM Beautifully written. Well done. Brandy Nicole February 12, 2026 at 6:45 PM Thank you, Daisy. Your kindness doesn't go unnoticed. Hugs and smiles. : ) Brandy

Laura Leiser February 10, 2026 at 8:15 PM Very pretty and romantic, Brandy. Your flowing lines accentuate the poem beautifully! :) Brandy Nicole February 12, 2026 at 6:41 PM Hi Laura, it's so nice to see you here. : ) I hope all is well in your world. Thank you for saying this is pretty. Like heart-shaped confetti falling all around me, it's so sweet and beautiful. You and your kind words are appreciated, my dear friend. Hugs and blessing to you. : ) Brandy

Paige Hind February 10, 2026 at 7:19 PM THIS is so sweet, Brandy. Wow. You write some breathtaking romance. I love "clouds curl" Brandy Nicole February 11, 2026 at 6:09 PM Dearest Paige, you're sweet and so kind. Truly ! I appreciate your lovely comment and compliment. Thank you for saying you love the curling of clouds. : ) They do that sometimes, when love lingers.