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Through the white mans cells He ponders his tomorrow's His dream has been found

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Jimmy Anderson

Date: 5/18/2010 9:15:00 AM

Congrats on your win in the contest, James! Great Senryu!....Jimmy

Date: 5/15/2010 12:29:00 PM

Wow! So much said about the power of this man's infuence on the world. We are a better people for it. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Abe's contest. Another honor for you to enjoy. Keep that pen flowing. Karen

Margaret Foster

Date: 5/12/2010 6:07:00 PM

Congratulations James. your words are perfect for the contest picture....well done...Margaret

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/12/2010 3:57:00 AM

James, Congratulations on your success in the “From a Birmingham Jail” with this well said haiku. Your creativity radiates. It's nice to see you here. And thanks for your kind comments recently. (Very helpful...) Lovingly, Dane Ann

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/8/2010 6:19:00 PM

congratulations, James on your win in this contest! LUv, andrea

Tim Ryerson

Date: 5/6/2010 3:39:00 PM

Yes, I believe this is where MLK's dream was found too, James...very fine interpretation of the picture...congratulations and as always thanks for your encouraging comments, my friend - Tim

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/5/2010 8:20:00 PM

Congrats James on your winning poem in Abe's contest on MLK with this excellent expression of the photo presented.. enjoy your victory tonight my dear friend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"