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Our Little Hummingbirds- a Collaboration

In my garden I heard a fluttering, and with tiny chirps a little bird was muttering. It was the smallest, sweetest bird I ever saw, Hummer then took a bath as I watched in awe, his wings beat so fast with no stuttering, then Hummer stuck his long needle bill in my Bourgeous! Spinning fast my glittering friend feeds on flower nectar- Oh, I would love to be a hummingbird collector! What a feisty, little dynamo- so sheen! Hummer has plumage iridescent and serene, I call him my flower garden inspector- I put out a sugar feeder and the next day I had fourteen! They were pure grace and innocence combined- such a rarity of hummingbirds so hard to find! Gentle with a kaleidoscope of colors bright, crystalline to medallion; what a gorgeous sight. All mixed like the rainbow of an artisan’s mind, making all the worries of my day alright. Hummer still lives outside my gazebo’s vine, sometimes inviting friends over to sugar dine- If only he knew how special is to nature’s best, exquisite and astonishing, I have confessed. Magnificent and breathtaking; hummingbirds divine- I will admit with this beauty I have been blessed! Collaboration - Grab A Writing Partner - Poetry Contest I chose picture #4 Sponsor: Joseph May January 14th, 2018

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Date: 4/21/2018 4:51:00 PM
Belated congrats on your win with this fine collaborative poem, Laura.
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Date: 1/21/2018 4:04:00 PM
What a charming poem LuLoo, many congrats on your win with Constance in the collaboration contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/21/2018 3:41:00 PM
Laura, congratulations to us on our win with this collaboration, it was so much fun writing with you.
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Date: 1/21/2018 5:02:00 AM
A beautiful write Luloo...Congrats and thanks for your support..
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Date: 1/15/2018 12:35:00 AM
Charming. Congrats on your successful collaboration.
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/15/2018 12:54:00 AM
many thanks lovely Line :)-luloo
Date: 1/14/2018 7:33:00 PM
"wolf-whistle!!" ~ ~ a 7+ It's amazing, they can be still while suspended in the air! Sweet write ladies :) Peace, Jill
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Date: 1/15/2018 12:54:00 AM
awwww thanks sweet Jill ;)-luloo
Date: 1/14/2018 7:03:00 PM
You did a fantastic job together. This is very creative writing. I have not read many but this is the one I am doing with my partner. I just hope we finish it one day!! I know the judge will love this, Laura.
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/15/2018 12:53:00 AM
thank you sweet Andrea :)-luloo
Date: 1/14/2018 4:32:00 PM
Laura, thank you for writing with me, I find our styles our so connected that we blend as one, it was an honor to do this with you twice now and hopefully we will again in the future. Best of luck to us in the contest !
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/14/2018 4:36:00 PM
thank you too sweet Broken Wings! :) -luloo

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